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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 21/10/07
Oooh, thank God it was a dream. I don't like Ginny being with Harry. Very nice chapter, and hopefully the next chapter will be out sooner, rather than later. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!!
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/08/07
Can't wait to see how the DADA classes go and with them having free roam and all. And love that they are dreaming about being with each other love this so far please more?????
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/08/07
Love it that Harry went with Hermoine to talk to her parents about their trips to Hogwarts. And that they are starting to have feelings for each other. Love it wish they was how it really was in seven but on the your next chapter
 

hagrid
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/08/07
Ah, yeh had me worried fer a bit there. Don't ever do that ter me again, havin 'Arry tell 'Ermione that he loves Ginny. I don't care what JK wrote, its just not right.
 

hagrid
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/08/07
Yer on a roll now, I can tell. A good chapter, a right good one. Give em som'att ter come back ter school for, and given' em Dumbldore back, what a shot of spirit that will add ter the mix.
 

hagrid
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 26/08/07
Now I don't normally comment on writers beggin fer reviews, but since I am in this chapter, I think I have a right. Yer need ter allow the readers a chance ter get ter know yeh, and the story. I was never great shakes at magic, but readin? I'm one of the best! If yeh slow down a little, give a few more details, don't rush things as they will happen fast or slow, but except fer dueling most things go better at a slower pace. Now, on ter the next chapter.
 

Mione7
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 01/08/07
HUH? I wish Harry had murdered Ron, no offense to Ron Lovers or anything like that.
 

morriganscrow
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 30/07/07
Okay...was it all a dream or not?
I will be watching out for your next update. Keep up the great work.
 

morriganscrow
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 30/07/07
A nice, fluffy chapter. I look forward to their return to school, and what their new jobs entail.
One tiny pet peeve - it's mUm, not mOm. Thanks!
Author Feedback: thanx for the review! ya...i know, it is mum and not mom, but sometimes i put it there by accident when im not too careful, even though i did live in britain for years!
mg2090
 

AjS
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/07/07
hey,
after deathly hallows, which was a fast read and a little heavy in terms of the characters in it, ie, very, very dark, with nothing light to relax the mind (and nobody was doing any relaxing while reading it! straight read through and through...).

the stories here, however, offer some respite in the middle, to go into cruise control...

anyways, can't wait for the next update! why don't you write longer chapters?
 

RupertsGirl112289
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/07/07
hmmm, was that really a dream? b/c it was hard to seprate the two, but yea I can't wait for the next chapter
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/07/07
...errr that was interesting i guess, even when you made harry get angry you still made him seem weak, seriously if you're going to make him blow up do it well.
 

the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/07/07
I REALLY liked it. You had me solidly going with those last three paragraphs. I'm SO glad that it was a dream! AND YES, I'll beta for you!

let me know. You know where to find me.


Regards,

the_scribbler
Author Feedback: THANKYOU! u just solved a big problem for me! my usual beta has been a bit depressed since DH so she is taking a break. ill e-mail you as soon as i get the next chapter out!
thanks for the review as well!
mg2090
 

timeturner02
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/07/07
Hello there

great chapter I dont it would actually go that way in reality but Hermione doesnt

Great scene with Ron and the Bill Fluer scene was quite funny as well

Ill check out your other fics liek you said ASAP

PS Cant wait for more
 

the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 26/07/07
Cool. No heat yet, but it's a good set up. Obviously, you've got a number of directions in which you can go with the story. I'd be interested to know what your story arch looks like and where you want to take this. Are you going to stay with your rating or is there going to be greater heat?

Are you going to use the teaching positions as a foil for their fight against moldymort?

Please...don't stop writing!

And...as for the reviews. I've gotten 49,000 discreet hits and only 170 reviews. I know...it gets depressing. Don't let it stop you, though. Write for yourself and for those of us who appreciate it

Regards,

the_scribbler
Author Feedback: thanx a lot for the review. it means a lot coming from the author of VX:Rebirth!

storyrating probably will go up later, but it will stay this way for now.

as for whats gonna happen...well ur just going to have to wait and see...

i know...the review thing is a bit depressing but theres no way im gonna stop writing coz of that.
thanx again,
mg2090
 

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