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The Missing Pieces

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nicole ncube
Unsigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 18/07/08
i'm so sorry about your grandma and i hope every thing is going well for you.
in my opinion you write stories from the heart and you seem... well real, like a person who is not afraid to express their feelings and thoughts and i admire that, not that many people like that are left, every bodies fake these days and there not them selves but try to act like other people which i find really insulting to the human race as we are born as individualls and should die that way.
ant way this story rocks and i cant wait for it to finish.
From your dailly reader Nicole Dawn Ncube
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 06/07/08
Lily potter???????????

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 06/07/08
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 06/07/08
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 06/07/08
awwww, it was so sweet. I want a guy like Harry *sighs*
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 06/07/08
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 06/07/08
the mental image of them at a roller rink in the 1960s decor is hilarious!
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/07/08
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/07/08
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/07/08
I loved the quote "You want me to store Death Eaters in my basement?"

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

aikokakashi
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/08
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next, keep up the great writing! ^_^
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 15/10/07
No problem hun, you do what you need to do. We will wait...lol. I know at the end of DH Harry goes off with Ginny, but uggg. I hate that ending...lol. Keep up the good work, and as always, God Bless!!
 

Solarstone
Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 02/10/07
Your personal spin on true and real love is indeed quite interesting, but it really doesn\'t make sense. The whole reasoning seems irrational and practically screams \"plot device!\". I\'d rather you achieve canon something that is easier to believe.

Actually, my biggest problem with this chapter was Lily. Her true love is Snape(I actually went WTF ). DH clearly stated that Lily thought of him as a friend, and not even a very close one even near 5th year. Stating otherwise just cheapens the love James and Lily shared. And Lily hinting to Harry that he should literally leave Mione, that\'s not the kind of advice a mom gives a son. The whole hallucination inside his head seemed more of an evil manifestation rather Harry\'s loving mum coming back from the dead to give him good advice.
 

Glykera
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 15/09/07
cool, i did not expect it to be dudley, update soon, this chapter was really good, but im waiting for when everyone finds out about harry and hermione, hope its soon.
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 15 | Date : 11/09/07
I totally understand. I hope you're well. (Thanks for the reassurance about your not writing R/Hr or H/G. LOL, It gives me the willies thinking about it too!)
 

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