This is too cute. Brother's in the same house. I know how that feels....lol. Good luck Albus, and stop picking on Albus, James...lol. Good luck writting the next chapter. God Bless!!!

This is a very interesting fiction. The first one about the life after HP era. I would have preferred that Albus was a Slytherin and Rose was a Ravenclaw - united towers.
Scorpio is very interesting character - I start even to like him. Want to see what will be next.

The most intriguing thing - what will the plot be. And James - he is too mean, although I must admit that I act the same when my younger sister annoys me.


Keep writing!

This is a very interesting fiction. The first one about the life after HP era. I would have preferred that Albus was a Slytherin and Rose was a Ravenclaw - united towers.
Scorpio is very interesting character - I start even to like him. Want to see what will be next.

The most intriguing thing - what will the plot be. And James - he is too mean, although I must admit that I act the same when my younger sister annoys me.


Keep writing!

this is really good! i\'m excited to find out what happens next. keep up the great work and update soon!

i like this story, still say through in sum h/hr, it could add for some drama

Nice job so f ar. I like this. The year for Al will be interesting... Although this does break PK's rules, but theres no real H/G shipping or R/Hr, so it's cool. Update soon!

I\'m enjoying this thus far. It\'s hard to do Next Generation stuff, without being completely cheesy. Goodness knows JKR didn\'t succeed at it.

But you\'re doing a good job thus far. You\'re giving more depth than just evil for Scorpius and just good and completely Harry like for Albus.

I look forward to your next chapters to see what you do.

And Rosie and Scorpius in Slytherin, interesting. And yes no doubt Ron Weasley that bastion of understanding, will not be pleased.

One last note, just like for who he\'s named for, I don\'t like this James Potter either. What a jerk.

aila wat shocks u\'l give?! slytherin?!!!!!!!!!! hermione and rons daughter?!! gawd.. but gr8 story ! !keep writin!

oh the drama! this is really good! it\'s a good thing Rosie didnt care what house shes in... I\'m really excited to find out what happens. update soon!

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hey before i start reading , is there gonna be H/hr, cuz the other ships, well they piss me off, anywayz if u dont got it, u shud through it in there, i mean im sure it'll make for a great chapter, maybe an affair or something, oh better yet what if Rose's Dad wasent Ron , its Harry , n ron's dumbass cant figure it out, i dunno , like that i guy said there gotta be h/hr, but if u need help puttin it in, send me an email , babyjoker187la@yahoo.com, i got sum ideas that wud help if ya need them

Rose in Slytherin Rons going to kill her, I cant wait to read more and see where your going with this.

That was cute or atleast the part written by you, but I am wonder whos kids Felton and Gaetan I'm going to guess they are twins from George.

Um, you know that on portkey ALL stories must have H/Hr? So unless you're planning to add that later, this can't be posted here...

Good start, though I wish you would have written more of your own. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Is it allowed in portkey? Because your story support canon which means it's H/G and R/Hr. I thought all portkey stories have to be H/Hr even if it is not the main ship.