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I just finished "A Fiery Affair" which had me all hot and bothered and then I scroll down and come to THIS ONE and I start crying. Thank you. Not that I really need the extra emotion..*sniff**sniff*
*Kisses*
~Moony
BTW- Thank you for setting out the tissues. Dont know how I would have survived without them. *Grabs extra and stuffs them in pockets before sneaking out the door* |
Author Feedback: Sad stories are a specialty of mine...I have more coming. 
Glad you like this...I was feeling it too as I was writing... |
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ClarissaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/04/08
Oh wow...This story was beautiful and tragic; a great homage to star-crossed lover romances like Pyramus and Thisbe or Romeo and Juliet. I really liked the ending. It was a sweet-sorrowness, and it really made the story. I liked how the at the begining, Harry was contemplating about his soon death and then, at the end, Hermione was also thinking about hers. This story was just simply lovely. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, that was the kind of feeling I was going for with this story...death is the unifying theme in this story, and I wanted to emphasize it as best as I could.
I'm glad you liked it...thanks for reading and reviewing.  |
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O wow! that was fabulous. i was really into the beginning and middle and then i read the end and i was like "NO!!!" so sad but great all the same. |
Author Feedback: Hey,
I'm glad you liked the story...it was meant to draw you in, and then inevitably end tragically...did you actually scream, "No!" 
Thanks for reading and reviewing.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/12/07
OMG AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH U MADE ME CRY!!!! SEE NOW I HAVE TO GO READ A FUNNY STORY!!! GRR!!!! anyway niiiiiiice story. points. points..... it really made me cry because my VERY good friend almost committed suicide but i walked in on him just in time if only... |
Author Feedback: Made you cry? Well I'm sorry...the story was meant to touch those who read it...
Hope your friend's alright now. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/09/07
HAHA! But he lives in the end, so they will be together soon, I WIN!!! |
Author Feedback: OK, you win. Have a cookie as a prize. |
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SydneyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/09/07
Oh no, it musn't end this way! It's so beautiful, but so sad. Please tell me Harry comes back to her... |
Author Feedback: Harry does come back to her...not in this world though, but in the next...and what happens then, is a complete mystery...
Thanks for reading...I'm glad you like it |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/08/07
So she killed herself to join him? What a nice ending! 
Wasn't it better to have him unexpectedly come back alive? |
Author Feedback: Certainly!
But I thought the whole tragic oh-woe-is-me path was a better way to go. |
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SydneyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/08/07
Wow. This is a really great story. Tissues are definitely needed for this one. Have you considered continuing it? I'm sure it would be just as beautiful. Plus, I can't bear to see Harry and Hermione apart. |
Author Feedback: Thanks *hands you a box of tissues*
I have considered continuing this story, but I've decided against it...I can only keep up the style for so long, and each succeeding chapter will be more and more difficult to write, as reason must take the place of emotion, which is what the story is based on...
But the Full Circle series have a reunited Harry and Hermione Let's just say they're the continuation of If Only |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/07/07
very sweet but sad at the same time but still good |
Author Feedback: Thanks. Glad you liked it. |
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genvesselSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/07/07
yeah. that scene was definitely missing from deathly hollows. that ron/hermione kiss was bullshit. a real way to deal with the probable end? smutfest. way to go. |
Author Feedback: Maybe I should email it to JK when she writes the remake. But I agree...the RH kiss was...erm, out of place? Unexpected? Like thrown in at complete odds with the flow of the plot? Not to mention disgusting and awkward...
Thanks though. Smutfest will rule the fanfic airwaves. |
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sad but lovely. very nice work. i liked it. nice job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/07/07
Why did it have to end in Angst ... can we get more Fluff/Smut please ? |
Author Feedback: Certainly. The next smutfic on the schedule is Angst, fluff, and you guessed it - smut. |
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mastapsiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/07/07
You have it marked for book 7 spoilers, but I didn't see any. |
Author Feedback: Harry eventually dies. How's that for a spoiler? |
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kajUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/07/07
Thank you It\'s such fun reading it. I will forever encourage everyone who continues the spirit of Harmony. I will read the fanfic instead of the book. It’s a great job you have and you’ll have my full support. Please don’t ever give up and continue the good work. DH is done it’s up to us to continue the magic. Harry and Hermione are still young I don’t think they mature yet. I don’t think I mature yet when I was at that age. So it’s our job to aid them in their journey towards maturity. (f_u_c_k the epilogue. JKR wrote the epilogue because she’s afraid of us anyway) Cheers to Harmony.!!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
DH made me angry as well...but I've let it go...I like to think JK doesn't have in inkling of love, because she's blinded by money...but let life go on...fanfic is better anyways. |
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HPFAN1Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/07/07
please write a sequel of some sorts. I want to know for sure if harry lived or died |
Author Feedback: Sadly, Harry dies, as that is the focus of the story...the title If Only also refers to the possibilities of life, if he didn't have to go... |
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