ainaSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/08/08
Please update! I really, really see so much in your story.... |
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AinaUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/02/08
Oh my GOSH that was simply amazing!!!!!! Continue updating!!!!!!!!!
I love your story. One of the best ones since DH. |
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Good ideas but not something I could sink my teeth into. These characters act and think much older than 17. Not normal. Need to proof-read more closely. |
Author Feedback: its fine. its not for everyone.
&& I konw they have very mature attitudes. if thats what youre refering too...idk. i mean they're a lot more mature than your average 17 year old. they jsut got out of a war that they played major parts in. i just think that i interpret them different. trust me they'll have they're flighty moments. but i mean ya. if your referring to reliving the old days. that just means that they were talking about times before al the fighting and the terror.
but thanks for the comment nonetheless. hope you find a good story you can sink your teeth into soon 
muuch muuch loove |
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Oh, I love this. There are some grammar mistakes but its a wonderful story  !
And yeah, it does make sense. Sort of like the songs at the end of One Tree Hill? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/02/08
YOU ARE AWESOME WRITER. I THINK YOU NAILED THE CHARACTERS. YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE CHAPTERS.  |
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I completely understand the taking-a-break-from-Portkey idea. I stopped around April of last year just because I had SO MUCH schoolwork, but suddenly (I think it was because I saw the OOTP movie and reread DH one too many times) in December I started reading fics again. I guess it's kind of a cycle.
Hah, you keep saying the chapters suck. But, erm... they don't? Anyways, I'm looking forward to the rest of the story and specifically when the "safe choice" starts kicking in. Hmm. Whenever that will be  . |
Author Feedback: i'm very sensitive about my writing and i never think its good enough. sorry.
glad someone understands my break fromm portkey. ya a cycle. that makes sense. plus i'm gettting sick of the fluffy fics, so my poor readers have a lot of angsty chapters ahead of them!!!
thnks for the comments!!
muuch muuch loove |
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dennisudSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 20/02/08
Can't wait to see how this turns and goes. Love the shared feelings and the laughter after such carnage.
Still things have to come to for with the Weasley's and H&H!
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Ok! so...good stuff. You've built the tension between the four (ron/ginny, Harry/Hermione) nicely and it will be interesting to see how you get Harry and Hermione together. I'm in the process of writing my long-expected Molly vs. Hermione scene and I get the sense that you've got something like that (Hermione vs. Ginny?) coming, too. I will be looking forward your chapters!
Regards,
the_scribbler |
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PMidNiteSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/02/08
I like it, it's a cool story, I hope Harry and Hermione can hook up without any trouble
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thanks for another great chapter - really looking forward to reading more soon |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/02/08
Well, it's moving things along somewhat as t hey slowly start to work out that their feelings for each other are returned. Meanwhile, both of them are trying to cope with the aftermath of the war and its attendent pain. It's a good smooth chapter that shows development on both their parts. |
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ZSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/02/08
nice chap that was a something i never read hermione say she went out on him and his pity thing pretty hard but its good, glad u updated too, i like how they all noticed his state at the end but did hermione notice too? update soon |
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great job! i cant wait ot read the rest of this story~! its amazing!!keep up the great work! |
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Aww this is soo cute. I love it and I hope that you keep updating it. I'm very interested to know if your gonna end up with harry and hermione together or if you're gonna use the epilogue. are u using the epilogue or ignoring it? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/02/08
I liked it a lot. I'm glad to see that you are back. 3 of my favorite stories are being written by you: Leaving the Past Behind, Caribbean Cruising and of course this one, The Safe Choice. I can't wait for the next update! |
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