Wow there's hope after DH. What about the 7 years after this moment before he would have to marry Ginny to make their children legitamate. Are we going there? I can't wait.

That was amazing! I cried with George. I can't imagine what it would be like to lose not only just a sibling, but a twin. I agree with you about the epilogue. It's so terribly written, it makes me think it was written quickly and just for the purpose of trying to shove OBHWF down our throats. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I really liked how you are setting this up... keep up the good work!

It was really good. I just finished the book and reading George like this made me cry again. But it looks good, let's see how you get everything ok. We really need this, I really need this.

Fantastic begining, I nearly cried while reading. You got George so well, you got all of them. And you didn't immediately break with what JKR wrote, which is nice although I think she must have been mad while writing that awful epilogue. Anyways, really really wonderful writing and I look forward to the next chapter.

Wow, this is a really good beginning. I think Book 7 is fantastic too but I felt very disappointed by how the ships turned out. I will be putting this story on my alerts.

All in all, I think your characterization of Harry was wonderful, and loved the fact that you immeadiatly didn't go for the whole "Harry all of a sudden realizes Hermione is cute" route, and chose to stick with the canon right out of the gate. Perhaps my only gripe, and excuse me if I'm a little blunt but I've never reviewed before, would be the line where Harry thinks to his parents. I don't think he would ever address them mother or father, just a simple mom (maybe mum?) or dad. And the word avenged seems too OOC.

Good one-shot.Poor Hedwig should have been added. In my little world,H/G,R/Hr,and Draco/OC divorce and marry their rightful partners.In fact, James will have the middle names of the Marauders,Fred,and Arthur,and Lily will have the middle names of Nymphadora,Molly,and Ginny.H/H's daughter born after the epilogue will have the middle name of Hedwig.

It's good to see that the dream still lives on and Portkey author's are still writeing. can't wait for the next chapter.

"Death in battle is honorable."

Good start. I like the fact that you still portrayed H/G in this. I hope the transition from H/G to H/Hr would not be disappointing and messed up -- will be looking forward to your next post. We really need an alternative for J.K.\'s epilogue.

i cannot wait to see how this goes! great jobe so far!

Um, that's "until the epilogue", not the prologue. And, like someone else said, I think it would have made more sense for Harry to call his parents "Mum and Dad" instead of "Mother and father".

Sorry, just a teeny bit of constructive criticism...

Anyway, you most definitely have me intrigued. As this is Portkey and all, I have no doubt that our favorite hero and heroine will be restored to their rightful selves and end up in each other's arms, as it should be... (And I'm hoping that Ron will end up with Luna on the side, too. )

Best of luck to you! I'll be following along!

got my attention.
want more

the last chap completely destroed the whole book.

(ok, so only got to peak while cousin was on holding on for dear life while i wait for my copy),
still.
i mean hello?
while rowling was brillent in her thinking up of the potter verse she's awfully stupid when it some to romances. and she's married 2.(isn't she?)

please make the world better by continueing this story and have a smart ending.

This is a nice start.( JKR could have some of this in the epilogue which would have been a great finish after so many surprises in book 7). This chapter really captures the reader's emotions who did not feel anything for the deaths of Fred Lupin and Tonks.

That was fantastic! Though I can't quite see Harry calling his parents "Mother and Father" rather than "Mum and Dad". That's my only nitpick, though.

I'm interested to see where you go with this - poor George! and poor Percy (never thought I'd hear myself say that).