great writing.

made me feel the rain on my face too.

But using dark lord when only his servants called him that?

Well, so this last Death Eater killed an innocent muggle, well, after all it's what they do, right? Harry will soon find the world's not going to eb as perfect as he thinks...

Well, this was sad. You almost had me in tears when George tried to make Fred come back...

I find I don't like how Harry acts toward Ginny, but I can understand it considering what's said in DH.

good so far...keep it up because I can't wait for more!

I really like your story so far. Everyone seems to think that I didn't like the epilogue solely based on the pairings also but I really did find it to be at a much lower quality than all the rest of the series had been. I look forward to reading the rest of what you come up with :-)

Ouou I really liked the ending! Poor Phyllis...boys in broomsticks! Hahaha anyway, I liked this second chapter. Is Harry helping the Ministry with the trials or something? Anyway...this has nothing to do with the story...but I just wanted to ask if you're planning updating VII again? Or is it abandoned? Well, until next time!

That was an awesome chapter! I like how you incorporated part of the epilogue into Harry's dream. It's refreshing that we know that that's what a Harry who had just survived the war would want. I highly doubt that it would become a reality if JK hadn't of been so stubborn as to cling to OBHWF when she sure as heck could have done a better job writing H/Hr. But, anyway... Aw, Poor Phylis! I wonder who AKd her.

Hey, loving the story so far. Can't wait for the H/Hr, update soon!

oh shit!! who's coming to power now??? cant wait till you update
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I really like this. I think it's cool that you're sticking with the canon ships for a while. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.

Hello there

Poor Lady how is she supposed to know Harry but if its a DE not like they would care

the Weasleys need to more careful and the Lovegoods to a castle home I guess it fits them

PS Cant wait for more

Hello there

this looks really good

I could really actually fell everyone pain especially Georges because it seemed so real

and all those names so many have been lost

Great chapter there! Really like the beginning of this story! Keep up the good work!

Hmm.. very interesting. I wonder who that Death Eater is? Must be raving mad to wonder into a Muggle home thinking that the person knows where Harry is.

Anyway, cheers! Update soon!

a wonderful start to the story, i love the idea of the wall being in the Hollow