See now that would have been a lovely ending. I like your ending much better than all of the spoiler endings. They are the right couples. Oh well, I guess we don't always get what we want in life. Very sweet chapter!

Nothing better than a clueless Harry finding his true love! Ron and Luna are Perfect for each other. Nice story.

*laughs* A nice, gentle story that works well on bringing two couples together. It was amusing to see both Harry & Hermione talk around how they felt about each other. The moves to get Ron & Luna together were softly done and they do seem a good pairing.

Did you read the book? I'm so upset how it ended...how predictable with who everyone would end up with! I was hoping Rowling would throw one of her famous curve balls, but no. Thank goodness there are amazing authors like you who won't back down for our favorite ship just because Rowling said there's no chance in hell for it to ever happen! Now that my ranting is over, very cute story. It was creative and sweet.

Awwwwwwww wwwwwww wwwwww wwwwww wwwwwww
That was so.....sweet.

Words fail me
Thanks.

Hahahaha!

Nice, cute! It cures the Reader's Rage, tbh.

Keep writing! Keep writing!

Nice oneshot! I liked how Harry couldn't pay attention to Hermione because he kept getting distracted. His indignation over someone borrowing Hedwig was great too, and I enjoyed how he and Hermione watched Ron and Luna because they didn't trust Ron not to screw it up. I also enjoyed Harry admitting how he felt about her to Hermione; he was obviously terrified but did it anyway, and her reaction was perfect. Ron calling Harry oblivious at the end was funny; it was classic pot calling kettle black.

A sweet balm for the soul! Very simple yet captivating. And JKR didnt want to do this kind?!? Anyway, whats done is done, but fanfiction goes on...and this one starts off with a resounding greatness. Thanks for the early cure for a disillussioned mind.

so cute and fluffly and nice and ahhh i so like so sos much