lampessaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/02/08
I know I've read this before and I'm glad I read it again. I really like this story. Not a long one but just the right amount of words to get me involved with the characters. Your writing gives them some life,so that they don't just sit there as text on my screen.
"She leaned forward and kissed him softly on the cheek, with so much precision and concentration that anyone else might have laughed, but he knew the value of her mind, and what it meant to be the center of her focus, what it meant to have every ounce of her thought and attention on him."
Pages and pages would have washed out a beautiful paragraph like the above.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/12/07
Just an observation, I noticed that you and other authors use from harry's point of view saying or thinking "if ron knew he would beat me into a pulp"...or something like that, unless you're a woman or man who grew overprotected, no man, less a teenager would think like that, without getting into the teen psyche, a guy would never consider not do something because he is afraid that his friend, let alone a peer would beat him up. |
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Fantastic story! Well in character, excepting Ron having "oblivious" in his vocabulary. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
cute! I like. \"And...they lived mostly happily ever after.\" That\'s the greatest!!
~luvsharrypotter (on FictionAlley) |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/07/07
that was a sweet story rons a clueless person at times but not as clueless as harry when it comes to love. |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/07
"And…they lived mostly happily ever after."
I'll happily take this ending! Yeah, Luna's attraction to Ron *was* one of the sets of anvils in the canon, wasn't it? |
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Yaaay! What a perfect balm to soothe my aching soul after reading that god awful epilogue from DH. Well done!! |
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aw, got to love everyone getting a happy ending - looking forward to reading more of your fics soon |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/07/07
You are so right!Thank god for fanfiction!
I love your storys, please stay H/Hr!!!
In my heart theres only one ending for HP and thats H/Hr! |
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awww. that was just so sweet. loved it, loved it. just what i needed to get out of my deathly-hallows induced depression. thanks. |
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Thanks for the smiles. I needed something light and harry and hermione after reading 7. Great job. |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/07/07
Wow ! That was awesome .... I needed it after DH ... keep it up ! |
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"but he knew the value of her mind, and what it meant to be the center of her focus, what it meant to have every ounce of her thought and attention on him."
But he knew the value of her mind... wow. Well done, you! Seriously, that is probably the line of the day--if not the week! This is a well-appreciated bit of fluff, considering the events of this weekend. Thank you for posting--I always enjoy your work!
Animagus-Steph |
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Awe, I truely needed this after being heartbreakingly let down with the last and final harry potter book. Thank you so much for conveying a pure love that H/Hr share. I salute you. : ) great job writing this. Your style is great and it flows rather nicely.
Ashley Ann |
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