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Good tale just one question, Why Draco?????
There are millions of names so why put Ginny with someone a Weasley wouldn/t be seen dead with.
The main reason I say this is because to put Draco with any of the main characters means you have to destroy one of the original characters by changing who they were or who they should be. |
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great idea, nicely written. kind of an old theme, but you put a great twist on it -- not boring at all. tbh, the summary was what got me interested in reading it in the first place. |
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Mione7Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/07
AWWWW! How sweet! Great story! Lotsa lotsa lotsa love from Mione7! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
'“I know how much you love that dress now, but I think it would be a lot more fun if you took it off now,”' Ah!! That's great. This is very nicely done. Way to go!
~luvsharrypotter (on FictionAlley) |
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PJSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/07/07
I had to read this because I was interested that the rating is listed as PG13 and in the summary it says it is PWP. That made me wonder if the rating was accidentally lower than it should be because usually PWP is short for Porn Without Plot in the adult fanfiction sites. So, curiosity had me read to find out. The rating is correct for this and I am wondering now what you intended PWP to stand for. *scratching head pondering*
This is a cute ficlet though, short and fluffy and perfect for a quick cup of coffee on a 10 min. break. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/07/07
Heh, very sneaky, Mr. Potter, getting her a special dress for that event and then making it even more special. After his actions, I doubt anyone there is going to object to her wearing that dress since he's obviously endowed it with considerable meaning. *wicked chuckle* Perhaps he can manage to start a new variation in wizarding tradition and/or formal dress.
This does leave room for all sorts of sequels should you wish to. |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/07
Cute little ficlet. I enjoyed reading it. Maybe I might read it again if DH turns out like everybody expects it to. |
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Awww, this is very cute! I like it a lot - the ending is very cute, but for it to be a pwp, there needs to be more p! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/07
I liked it a lot. I can't wait to see what ese you have in store for us. |
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ohh. it was really cute. nice job there. cant wait for the book! |
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Perfect!!! I love how they're all so settled with each other! Hermione can't cook - fantastic! I knew she wasn't perfect! Makes me feel better about myself really!
PS glad she said yes!!! haha! |
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pefect one-shot - a lovely simple proposal and nice to see all our favourite couples happy. looking forward to reading more of your fics soon! |
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gingercatUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/07
They are always the last couple to get married! Harry is so darn slow. Cute story, and the red dress was nice. |
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Not bad, but Harry's proposal was a little lacking in the demonstrative department. Even if he's completely pants at getting the words out he should be able to go through the appropriate motions. Still, I sippose Hermione was just glad he got the words out at all! |
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