This is a really great fic! I love it! I like it ever so much more than JKR's version. I know she couldn't put this in hers, ,but it doesn't mean it wouldn't have made for good reading.

Dang! Any chance JKR is going to release the uncut version of HBP any time soon, the one with all the juicy parts left in? After all, a co-ed high school where the students stay in dorms with virtually no adult supervision? They must put contraceptives in the pumpkin juice!

Nicely done, a pleasant bit of smut to brace ourselves with for DH.

very nice sweetie!!!! we all know that's how that scene SHOULD have gone down hmmm... ((closes eyes and pictures it)) oh most definitely... as always, keep up the great work! rock out! -aj-

One of my favorite oneshots!!! That is how it should have been in HBP. I just knew they were going to get together, but then Ron had to barge in. Thanks for writing the chapter that should have been!

That was simply and uterly fantastic! You truly are talented. I don't know how you manage to churn them out the way you do but you are one of the best fan fiction authors that this fandom and our ship has. We are so lucky! The characters, the story, and the overall feel of the fic are incredible! This is so going on my favorites as well! Can't wait for the next one!

yet another perfect chapter from you -can't wait to read more of your fics soon

You're so sweet ... I'd do anything for you.
(Should we try to kidnap JKR and coerce her to go with H/Hr )
Lol !
I love the awesome amount of smut you're posting on your LJ !!!
Please continue ... I have a feeling we'll need it unless there is a miracle and DH turns out to be H/Hr !

Loved it! You should write the ending of the last book, since I'm sure we're not going to be happy with it. Lovely story. Great descriptions. They're just perfect together! Thanks for sharing this.

*wicked laugh* Oh, that is going to change a lot of things. This Ron will never know what he gave up in his blindness, or at least let Harry see clearly first. I like the way this developed, as the banked fires between them rapidly burst into flame and their passions for each other consumed them. It reads well without being overly graphic or explicit and that's appreciated.

tht was rely gret smut. kep up the goed wrok i was geting hot wit taht stroy..

My God! I've been an avid fan of your writing for the longest time, and I just have to say that this particular one is one of your best! Its not really the absolute perfection of your love scene but its the in between things, the little details you write to get to "it." Absolutely riveting! You're one awesome writer!
~Rodare

Wow. That's the only thing to say. Wow. The ending made me cry, I must admite. This is by far one of your best works. Wow. I can't wait to read your next.

---Tiger111991

No doubt, this was another amazing fic! You\'re one of the best h/hr writers out there and your consistent release of great stories keep me hooked on h/hr! I love it!!!! Hope to see more soon

I've come across stories where they changed that awful scene, but never one like this! Woooooo!

A very, er, satisfying little oneshot. I enjoyed Harry's internal dialogue about Hermione and how she went from just pretty to exquisite by the end of it. Thanks for sharing this with us