NatashaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/09
Wow you are a great writer somethings I did hear in your other story, but good things should I guess stay the same. So I am quite curious to know whether this is from a girls point of view or guys. But great one chap fic seriously. I like the emotion and the connection told and expressed between Harry and Hermione. |
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So amazing, so beautiful, this truly is what should have happened in HBP. I always felt that this would have been the perfect moment for the two of them to admit their feelings for each other. |
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How I wish that this moment had happened, I'd even had settled for snogging instead of shagging if it meant they got together...
~Matt |
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Wow. Too bad this didn't happen in the book. ^_^ LOL Great fic and very hot! |
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CandraSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/11/07
I loved your story! Harry was really sweet with Hermione. He really knows how to make a girl feel special. |
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DJ RaineySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
i can't tell you how amazingly brilliant this piece of writing was. despite the smut in this piece, i seriously would have taken this to be JKR's lost files. so great writing, and i'll definitely be reading more of you work. |
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mikachooSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/07
That was...amazing. So amazing, I am utterly speechless. Why didn't that happen in the book? Why? |
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This is soo cute!!! I had hoped ever book that Harry and Hermione would get together and sadly it will never happen. Ron is so stupid...haha! Good Job!!! I love reading your hundreds of stories...hehe!!! |
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Is this a repost? It seems very familiar. Good, but familiar. I do wonder why Harry could not have lent a helping hand near the end to help seal the deal, at it were.
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"No matter what happened, he could hold on to her…" Awww! You did an awesome job, I can't wait to read more of your work (as always!)! |
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That was, bar none, some of the best smuff I have ever read. It was wonderfully tender and hawt as hell. I liked the way the scene segued from canon to not-so-canon.
Thank-You!!! |
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SarahUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/07/07
That was, without a doubt, the most brilliantly written fanfic I have ever read. It as purely flawless. You are a wonderful writer. And one thing I loved about it (besides it being h/hr and no spelling/grammar errors, which I HATE in fanfics), was that you added to what J.K had written. I almost believed it was her writing...well, except for the dirty stuff lol. You took a part I hated in the novel and turned it into something wonderful. I have chills. |
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ZeelthorSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/07
Wow, this is, I'm sure, the best oneshot and fic I have ever read.
You've captured the whole thing very well, the characters are just the way they should be.
The sex scene is fantastically written and although it offers little surprising turns, it did not really matter.
You also managed to put in quite a lot of humor, which was great.
Gotta see what other stuff you've written now. xD |
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That was something nice for me to read after everything that has happened. Thank you for that wonderful piece of fan fiction. Can't wait for more.
Now, to distract my mind some more with.... MORE fan fiction. |
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tui_nuiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/07
This is really simple beautiful story and I hoped so badly that JK will see a really beautiful relations about them |
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