OH wow love how Hermione told the girls about the magical world. Love this can't wait to see what Harry and Hermione do for a living or if they work or are going to college or something.

Great start. I haven't seen Raising Helen but pretty much all I knew about the movie was in these first two chapters. It's going great so far and I hope you update soon.

Interesting start. Good luck continuing it; and a good way of telling the story to kids, even though I skipped most of it

This is a really good story and I can't wait until the next chapter. I like the story a lot. Please update soon.

Harry and Hermione together forever!!!

hey gud story, it works wel nd im not confused so gud work! YAY! plz update soon