CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/07
Heh, sounds like one of the more educational courses Hogwarts could offer. I suspect nothing would slow hormonal teenagers down more than being firmly and solidly familiar with the possible consequences of acting too rashly. Still, it was a most entertaining story and I liked the pairing used (though, really, Seamus and Pansy? I hate to think how -their- private life went, given that small sample we saw in public). What would be a fascinating "follow-up" would be to see how many of these pairings "took" in real life.
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Author Feedback: Pansy and Seamus = lots and lots of make up sex. Let me tell you that. Hahaha.
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hahaha, love the fic, it was quick pace yeah! but it was fun to read, specially Jacob rhymes. Love the children name by the way. |
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that was really cute! u should do something like a sequel to that! |
Author Feedback: ANOTHER sequel to that? Haha, I don't know. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Wow, i luved this story...it was funny but sweet at the same time... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
I really enjoyed this. I thought that it was really funny in many of the parts, especially as Jacob got older and caused more mayhem. |
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Aww, you should write a companion piece to when they actually do have Jacob. Or a Jacob/Serena piece, haha. |
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That was a great story. Though it would have been cool off you had a chapter for each of the days/years, but it's ok. I would have liked to read what Harry and Jacod did to Snape, but I'll just let my imagination fly. I really found it sweet when Jacob wanted to shave and said “I saw Dad doing it, and I wanted to do it.” It was very cute and sweet.  It seems kind of sad that all the "children" disappeared, but hopefully Jacob will show up in a few years.  It would be nice to have an epilogue where Jacob is born, REALLY born, in the hospital and Harry holds him and says "welcome back Jacob", or something like that. Think about it, if you don't do it thats fine, I still have my imagination. By the way you did a good job with Hagrid. |
Author Feedback: Oh don't worry, Jacob will be showing up soon.
And the sequel is up. Jacob is back, and Harry's thinking about nappies.
Oh, I thought I did a horrible attempt at Hagrid! But I dunno, I don't usually write him, but I was like, "you know what, screw this," and just wrote whatever down.
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I loved this idea.I also like the fact that these kids can become "real".Can you write a sequel where Hermione gets pregnant with Jacob? |
Author Feedback: Yes, I did write the sequel.
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I loved the name of Jacob! I always imagine Harry and Hermione having a baby and naming him like that.
It was funny, and I am sure that taking care of a baby that grows so fast is an experience... a stressful one.
Congratulations for the story,
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Author Feedback: Thank you!!! It was either that or Andrew. I just lluuurrrve those names for two Potter boys. Sorry, shutting up now.
But thanks for the review!!!
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I liked it but the whole idea of having your child and then just disappearing was a little too weird for me! And then the thing with the cauldron, wouldn't that freak out Harry a bit? I mean he saw like the re-birth of Voldemort, and he came out of a cauldron! Oh well, it was a entertaining read, so thanks! |
Author Feedback: Well, Harry wasn't really thinking like that. He saw a baby, not a touch up version of Michael Jackson. I mean--err... never mind.
Thanx for the review!!!
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Why would there be flames? I liked this a lot. Very funny stuff going on with Jacob and catching his "parents" in the act half the time. Ron's still going to marry Luna,isn't he? He can't hide his feelings for long! And your D/G wasn't bad. As long as Draco is still snarky and mean, then he's fine with me.  Nice job! |
Author Feedback: Flames? Let's see here. I just type-raped them. And, etc.
Ahhh yes, Ron and Luna will get married. He's just a little slow. Remember, Ron's daughter, and Malfoy's daughter is two years YOUNGER than Jacob. So they're just a bit slow. And Draco is kissing Ginny, even if it's brief and to the point. (Haha sorry, couldn't help myself.) Ron, well, everyone knew he had the emotional range of a teaspoon. When he proposes, he'll be propmosted to tablespoon.
Thanx for the review!!!!!!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Great story! Very original idea, which is hard to do with several thousand fanfics already posted. I think this is one of my favorite H/Hr stories ever! |
Author Feedback: Haha thanks, but it wasn't my idea. I took a challenge from the fourms here.
But thanks for the review, and I'm flattered that you like the story so much!!!!
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