gakSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/07
Ahhhhh! I now have a new "feel good" story to re-read on those days when the laundry is piled too high, the kids are screaming, toys are everywhere, the toilets need cleaning and my husband calls to say he's invited his boss over for dinner and they are leaving the office now. |
Author Feedback: LOL...don't envy you at all! But I'm glad you liked the story and it made you feel good. I loved writing it as well. Thanks for taking time out of your busy life to send me such a nice note. It's appreciated an awful lot! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/07
Really nice fic! I loved it all, it's so sweet! |
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Oh, this has to be the bestest fic I've ever read here on portkey. Wonderful! Keep up the ah-mazing work!!
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Good story - really enjoyed it. They are so meant to be together! It's is so obvious! lol |
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Fabulous! I love it when Harry and Hermione finally share a kiss and it's wwwwwwow on both their parts.  Great writing--loved all the subtle details of their relationship and that Luna helped them along. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Now that was a loving and gentle story as they finally realized with their heads what their hearts had long ago realized, that they fit and complement each other in so many ways and that they really do belong together. I loved the route they had to take to get there, both having to be encouraged by others and both willing to step out and try it. I wonder if there's a double wedding in the future? |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Yum ! Yum ! I want more ..... please write more fics like this one here ....
Anyway good work ... keep it up ! |
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Aww, people can be stupid and clueless sometimes, just like people are stupid and clueless to the fact that Harry and Hermione belong together! This was a cute story, a good little fic for the week before Deathly Hallows! Keep up the good work!! |
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This was a great story! I really liked how you emphasized the little things that Harry and Hermione do for each other. I feel like it's the small things--the looks, the touches, knowing someone so well that you don't have to ask them what to do or say--I feel that embodies a lasting relationship. This idea is captured so well in your story and I hoping JKR sees this story and hopefully DH is a steer in this direction--H/HR! Thanks for the story! |
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good job. i think you should definately do a sequal . i think your leave your fears behind is really good and cant wait for more from you. there were a few typos i belive such as " woke" instead of "waked" and i think you meant "probed" instead of "proved". other than that great job and keep up the good work
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ohh my good these was so cuet so nice so tender sweet and ofcouerse its the best way to finish these day |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Yea! That was cute and a little sexy. But too fast in the love making part, but other wise not bad. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
That was a great story. I really liked it. It wasn't overly fluffy, just enought to make me smile and feel all warm-hearted. Lovely job. |
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Great one shot. Loved the story. I thought it was great. Truly wonderful. I'd like to read more one shots from you. Keep up the great work, don't waste the talent. w00t |
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I'm becoming a big fan of your writing. This was fantastic. As to what you do with Leave Your Fears Behind, I don't really care as long as there is some form of update. That story rocks!!!
Cheers
J R Potter |
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