Radical story. I love stories where Harry and Hermione pretend to date, and then end up falling in love with each other.

I have read this story at least 3 times already. This is a truly wonderful and well-written story. Your description of their friendship is cute, their obliviousness is amusing and their sex is hot! Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it to us.

I simple adore stories just like that : it´s started with Just Pretend, and finished with love, because they´re a little beat blind, hehehehe.

I like Ron and Luna, and in this one, they´re annoying, but good annoying.. and funny.

Very hot the kitchen scene, and wonderful write, just like all your other stories.

Congratulations!

Awww, this story was absolutely adorable. I really liked it! I can't wait to read more of what you've wrote!

this is like soooo sweet...but of course, it would've been nice if there were jealous moments for both harry and hermione...uhm, more jealous moments for harry though...hehehe...but all in all, i'd say this work of yours is already great as it is...nice work!!!

well that was a cute oneshot...i've read it before but i don't remember if i reviewed it...just wanted to say i liked it...thanks for writing it

Ahh! This is so sweet! I love how Hermione keeps one hand on his heart...
I really like your stories!

it is such a cute story. And it is also great story. I give it a 5 out of 5.

a great story in your portfolio. I will make sure to check out others.

Awww that was so sweet, I love that hermione was so flirty and Luna was funny.

One of my favorite "let's pretend" stories! I can read it again and again.

Yet another great fic!! I don't know how you do it!! Keep the amazing stories flowing!!
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Aww, that was such a cute read. I really enjoyed reading that.

Wow, this was so great, keep up the good work. (by the way, I enjoyed this so much thatI'm reading all of your fics) ;>

I don't remember if I commented this story already, but I just noticed that you make Luna a 'seer'... or whatever. I always thought that she had some impressive powers, so I love the fact that you write her having these powers.

And I love how Harry and Hermione realised that they were in love with each other. I love all the stories in which they have to pretend, because you know it will lead to undying love.

Congratulations again, and until next time. Oh, and I would like to advise you to write more one shots, if you have the proper ideas, because you are as good with them as with multichaptered stories.

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