Awww that was so sweet, I love that hermione was so flirty and Luna was funny.  |
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One of my favorite "let's pretend" stories! I can read it again and again. |
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Yet another great fic!! I don't know how you do it!! Keep the amazing stories flowing!!
ramble on
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AphySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/07
Aww, that was such a cute read. I really enjoyed reading that. |
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TempestSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/09/07
Wow, this was so great, keep up the good work. (by the way, I enjoyed this so much thatI'm reading all of your fics) ;> |
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I don't remember if I commented this story already, but I just noticed that you make Luna a 'seer'... or whatever. I always thought that she had some impressive powers, so I love the fact that you write her having these powers.
And I love how Harry and Hermione realised that they were in love with each other. I love all the stories in which they have to pretend, because you know it will lead to undying love.
Congratulations again, and until next time. Oh, and I would like to advise you to write more one shots, if you have the proper ideas, because you are as good with them as with multichaptered stories.
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Author Feedback: Aww, that was so sweet of you to say! I will probably write more one-shots at some point, since I have several plot bunnies to explore, but like you said, they have to be good ideas. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. It was so nice of you!  |
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ohh i loved it. i don't usually enjoy one-shots because i think they can be far too short and rushed but i think this one was well written!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you for such a nice thing to say. I was afraid some readers would think it was too long to be a one-shot, but it's the way it came out and I wasn't about to cut any part of it off. I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
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gakSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/07
Ahhhhh! I now have a new "feel good" story to re-read on those days when the laundry is piled too high, the kids are screaming, toys are everywhere, the toilets need cleaning and my husband calls to say he's invited his boss over for dinner and they are leaving the office now. |
Author Feedback: LOL...don't envy you at all! But I'm glad you liked the story and it made you feel good. I loved writing it as well. Thanks for taking time out of your busy life to send me such a nice note. It's appreciated an awful lot! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/07
Really nice fic! I loved it all, it's so sweet!  |
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Oh, this has to be the bestest fic I've ever read here on portkey. Wonderful! Keep up the ah-mazing work!!
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Good story - really enjoyed it. They are so meant to be together! It's is so obvious! lol |
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Fabulous! I love it when Harry and Hermione finally share a kiss and it's wwwwwwow on both their parts.  Great writing--loved all the subtle details of their relationship and that Luna helped them along. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Now that was a loving and gentle story as they finally realized with their heads what their hearts had long ago realized, that they fit and complement each other in so many ways and that they really do belong together. I loved the route they had to take to get there, both having to be encouraged by others and both willing to step out and try it. I wonder if there's a double wedding in the future? |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Yum ! Yum ! I want more ..... please write more fics like this one here ....
Anyway good work ... keep it up ! |
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Aww, people can be stupid and clueless sometimes, just like people are stupid and clueless to the fact that Harry and Hermione belong together! This was a cute story, a good little fic for the week before Deathly Hallows! Keep up the good work!! |
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