Harry85Signed | Chapter : 16 | Date : 28/03/08
I wonder why Ron's so fascinated with that book. It isn't another kind of diary of Riddle's, is it? |
Author Feedback: No, but it has a similar concept to it...its function is to drain a person of his or her strength, while at the same time being a fascinating read...the effect spreads, and that's a way to protect the secret of the Order of Merlin... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 15 | Date : 28/03/08
So, she is going to get the job, and then the golden Trio can rule the world!   No, seriously, I think a minister like her could really be good for the investigation. And the order is going to help too...  |
Author Feedback: Well yea, I mean, I do patronize the reader a bit. Hermione seems like a natural choice for a minister...im gonna work towards harmonizing Ministry and Order work, but keep it clandestine for the most part... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 28/03/08
Good chap, action packed. I truly liked it, and I hope emily lives. They should find a better hiding place for them though.
I wonder how did Harry know he had to go there and help them though. |
Author Feedback: Oh yeah, agreed...action packed chapters won't be many, with all the info they need to uncover, but the action will pick up once they know what to do exactly...
And Harry was just checking up, as part of his job...he didn't know beforehand |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 28/03/08
OI! They are on their way to occupy all the spots of power insid the Ministry, uh? Can you believe it? Hermione Minister, Ron head of the Aurors, and Harry head of the MLE...maybe put Luna, Draco and Ginny leading some other important department and they would have complete control of the government, maybe that could help with the investigation... |
Author Feedback: Well, in the series, the government was doing everything that was counter-productive, and I thought it's about time someone competent took the reins of power...
Of course I can believe it...with the trio pulling the strings, things will get interesting, and it's not your conventional arrangement either 
Ginny, Draco and Luna will be more involved with the Order than the government...but I'll see what I can do for them. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 28/03/08
Well, I don't think in a dire situation like that they would cast aside a man dying on a train. Or at least, they shouldn't. |
Author Feedback: Harry and co. didn't know the guy on the train was killed...and the Death Eaters...well, that's their job...they just don't care about the departed. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 28/03/08
Didn't Draco have proof that Bellatrix was regrouping the Death Eaters? I wonder what that letter to Harry is about... |
Author Feedback: He might have, but the lead was lost...I'm planning a different way that they'll find out about it...
That letter is for Harry to protect the secret of the Order of Merlin, as well as the documents pertaining to it... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 28/03/08
Really nice wedding you wrote here. I'm a bit surprised that no attacks happened, Belaltrix mut have known Harry was getting married... |
Author Feedback: I want to retain an element of surprise still...an attack every chapter would get kind of old, wouldn't you say?
The occasional peaceful scene would only enrich the story and add diversity... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 27/03/08
I wonder who was the Death Eater who got there after they left. Apart for that, I didn't see anything for which you should be particularly worried about this chapter. |
Author Feedback: My aim is to add to the mystery and tension of the chapter by having unknown attackers...and I see it works,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 27/03/08
Good chapter, and the plot thickens. so Draco is on their side, nice.
But there is a sentence you left hanging more or less midway through the chapter, when Ron went back home and talked with Luna, you might want to take a look and fix it. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, the young Malfoy is intentionally on their side...I'm tired of the whole evil Draco thing...
And I'll see about the sentence...might have missed it by accident. Thanks for pointing it out. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 27/03/08
Well, i find it strange that Hermione would be surprised by an already stunned Death Eater, but apart for that the chapter was good. |
Author Feedback: That's a part of my attempt to avoid Super!Harry and Super!Hermione...when death is at the door, even stunned DEs can surprise her.. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 27/03/08
I'm sorry for the sad events of your real life, really. 
As for the chap itself, it was good. Now they have an hunch that some death eater might be behind the attacks. Which is true, considering Bellatrix's attempt to double her soul and such.
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Author Feedback: Thank you for your concern...and life also has its sad moments.
The so-termed good guys will continue to have brushes with Death Eaters, and I've set it up for them to reveal it's Bella behind it...and the doubling of her soul will be an issue later on...it has to do with the Order of Merlin |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/03/08
So, Bella's cronies are becoming more active? Iwonder how will it take to the good guys to find out who's behind the killings. |
Author Feedback: Bella is behind the whole thing, yes. Only, the good guys don't know about it yet, and I'm still trying to figure out what kind of proof they'll have to find that it's indeed Bella behind the killings... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 27/03/08
I'm lucky I can head directly to next chap to find out. It's strange he couldn't do the Patronus charm though. |
Author Feedback: Lucky? Why...this chapter has been up for a while now
The reason Harry's magic isn't quite up to par has to do with the whole coming back to life thing...not quite fully adjusted at this stage... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/03/08
Sweet chap, and i loved how he proposed again to her, in the same place where he did the first time. |
Author Feedback: Yup, the symbolism was intentional...just picking up where they left off. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/03/08
Nice chap. I guess Harry really has to thank Ginny, although I wish he hadn't. |
Author Feedback: He has to, in the end, yeah...it's the only gentlemanly thing to do anyways...how awkward would it be othewise? |
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