|
.....The ending has me itching for more! I can't wait too know what happens next. And I have a bad feeling about the person who apparated shortly after them.....
....I just hope I'm wrong.
Loving this.
~Harmony_4ever88 |
Author Feedback: I have a feeling I know who the mysterious person is too. 
Next chapter is coming up as soon as I write it. |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 15/06/08
Nice chap, I wonder who is the mysterious figure in the shadows...  |
Author Feedback: The answer to that will soon become apparent...  |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 06/06/08
Well, let's see if they can learn more on Mortimer having the DE reading the book...  |
Author Feedback: They will learn more, but the better question is if one of 'em DEs won't die reading the book. |
| |
|
WOW! I really can't wait to see what happens with the meeting and Harry's dream coming true.
Looking forward to updates immensely!
~ Harmony_4ever88 |
Author Feedback: The meeting will be the focus of chapter 22...and I was actually planning to have the conversation Harry and Hermione held right at the end of this chapter over ten chapters ago...
Ch,22 I will start working on tomorrow...thanks for reviewing. |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 01/06/08
Good chapter, now I can't wait to see what happens next!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks...and the next chapter is in the workshop as of today.  |
| |
pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 31/05/08
All power corrupts... Ron using Crucio on someone with that many witnesses? The Ministry Six are in danger of becoming a law unto themselves. |
Author Feedback: Ron was well within his rights to use Crucio against someone who threatened to kill him, and those around him, and he is the head of the Auror department...
They aren't locking power onto themselves and becoming the law...this whole scenario occurred because they were absent from power in the first place, since Ron and Hermione were incapacitated for a period of time...
Ginny, Luna and Draco are just going to oversee the trio's positions, and the latter three will only have marginal contact. |
| |
booster-tSigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 30/05/08
Uhhh ... do you not mean "Enimfo luost sRIfeht Morfesir, Enoevarb Odaedeth Morfesir, Avada Kedavra"
|
Author Feedback: Ah, you have a sharp eye...I was rewriting that spell, and I must have missed it...thanks for pointing it out. |
| |
|
Well I'm very happy for Mr. Boggart. Got what he deserved the bloody bastard. And I'm dying to know what happens next.
~Harmony_4ever88 |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I'm happy for him too, and very much so...he should have fun with the dementors
Chapter 21 I am working on still, but I'm also contemplating the sequel for A StrikeUpon the hour... |
| |
I have sat here for over 2 hours to finish reading this because I didn't want to stop it was so good. I'm IMMENSELY looking forward to what happens next.
This has become very addicting and I await the next chapter....and the next...and the next....
Oh and about the 2 spells did you make the words up? If so do they have any meaning to you? And if not what do they mean and is the language Latin?
Would like to know. When you tell me feel free to mail the answers to butterfly10f[at]aol[dot]com
Thanks!
~Harmony_4ever88 |
Author Feedback: I'm happy you like the story so much.
Currently, I'm working on chapter 20, and it will be up, hopefully today or tomorrow...
As for your questions, I have emailed you the answers.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 19 | Date : 22/05/08
Mmh, well, we didn't learn a great lot on Mortimer Evans, did we? Can't wait to see next chapter to see how this develops. |
Author Feedback: Remember that book, due to which Hermione is ill? It's a chronicle of the Order's history, and the person in question is meticulously detailed in there. |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 15/05/08
Ah, well, having two spies in her ranks will be useful, if they are smart enough to not get caught. But somehow I doubt they are... |
Author Feedback: It is useful, yes, and Avery and Nott will be the ones who give focus to the order on what exactly to look for...so they will be around for some time...I don't know whether I'll kill them off or not. |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 17 | Date : 28/03/08
Aww, don't leave us with such cliffies! I don't know what that book does, but it's the second time we see it affect someone, first Ron's fascination with it, now Hermione fainting as she read it, and then Ron too...it isn't cursed, is it? |
Author Feedback: I mentioned in my last reply what the book does, so that should alleviate your question for the time being I'll try to upload sometime in the beginning of next week, if I can, but I'm not sure I'll manage it...
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 16 | Date : 28/03/08
I wonder why Ron's so fascinated with that book. It isn't another kind of diary of Riddle's, is it? |
Author Feedback: No, but it has a similar concept to it...its function is to drain a person of his or her strength, while at the same time being a fascinating read...the effect spreads, and that's a way to protect the secret of the Order of Merlin... |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 15 | Date : 28/03/08
So, she is going to get the job, and then the golden Trio can rule the world! No, seriously, I think a minister like her could really be good for the investigation. And the order is going to help too... |
Author Feedback: Well yea, I mean, I do patronize the reader a bit. Hermione seems like a natural choice for a minister...im gonna work towards harmonizing Ministry and Order work, but keep it clandestine for the most part... |
| |
Harry85Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 28/03/08
Good chap, action packed. I truly liked it, and I hope emily lives. They should find a better hiding place for them though.
I wonder how did Harry know he had to go there and help them though. |
Author Feedback: Oh yeah, agreed...action packed chapters won't be many, with all the info they need to uncover, but the action will pick up once they know what to do exactly...
And Harry was just checking up, as part of his job...he didn't know beforehand |
| |
|
