I think I've read it before, but i'm not sure. Anyway, sad piece. And, I'm not completely convinced the prophecy would be fulfilled if both of them died.

I thought it was good and quiet sad but the emotions were not very "powerful" in the sense that I "felt" them....if that makes sense lol but I still liked it regardless

Please tell me there's a sequal! You can't end it like this!

I hope he doesn't die! Will there be more? I hope so. It was a wonderful read.

A very pognant story, there, and I'm not at all certain Harry took the proper move. I keep wondering if having Hermione there with him, even if she passed beyond with him, wouldn't give him that extra edge to make certain events happened as they needed to happen to stop Voldemort. It's a very sad and moving story, but that last bit is a comfort.

Well... it was well written but rather angsty... However not a problem I feel as I too once tried to write something to this effect. Unfortunately it didn't get past the moderators because of "grammatical errors" even though I couldn't find any. Anyways well written and I hope this is not the end as I want to know what happens

Okay, that almost made me cry...very powerful writing, I loved it!

very sad. nice work. does this mean Harry ended up dying? i think so..

"Yet, he loved her; so much, that it was painful. His heart tore, because he had not a choice - tonight was the last time she would see him alive. Only, she did not know, and he could not bear to tell her." Wow!! I was crying by the end of this...it was very powerful...brilliant work!! I look forward to reading much more of your work!!