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A...ma...zing. Wow. This was a great fic!! I really liked this one line you had..."They had been seeking comfort but they had fallen—no, not fallen, that was too violent, too harsh a word to describe it —they had slid, drifted, into love… It had been slow, gradual, but inexorable, as inevitable as the ebb and flow of the tide, as the rise and set of the sun, as natural and unnoticed as gravity…"...That is a perfect description of Harmony, how it should be in the seventh book, gradual and inevitable. Great story, keep up the good work!! |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Oh my god ! I just love your fics ... I'm at a loss of words ... keep writing ! |
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gluglugSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
I read this on your LJ yesterday and was glad to see it posted here. Another amazing piece of writing - you are the queen of the H/Hr one-shots!
I don't really like the idea of H/Hr getting together after Ron's death, but you handled this beautifully. Harry and Hermione need each other and you were able to translate that need into a healing and a deep love between them.
I hope you continue to write H/Hr, even after DH. I still hold out hope that we will prevail. We'll know in five days!
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
A very poignant, but ultimately hopeful, story that works quite well. I can't see Harry & Ginny staying together if he's hunting Horcruci and she's still in school, they're going to be growing apart, not together. If Hermione and Ron are both with him, and Ron is then lost in the last battle, I can see Harry & Hermione comforting each other, and bcoming more than friends, simply because, as you showed, no one else could understand. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/07
always wonderful to see your written work. I love how you perceive the relationship between Harry/Hermione. I needed some serious h/hr this week thank you. Great work. |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/07
DO wish book 7 would end like this. What I saw from the spoiler has broken my heart already.
Also hope, from the bottom of my heart, that you and all wonderful authors never give up and keep on writing. Your stories are like magical remedies to cure my hearts. |
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 Brilliant brilliant brilliant!! I really like how you made them get together slowly, how they just sort of fell into their places on the puzzle board or something. I also really like how you made Ron a good guy in this. It isn't often that I like Ron in a Harry and Hermione story, but in this one...even though he technically was not present, he was a good guy and I liked it!  |
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Not very fluffy, but still very good. I'm not a huge Ron fan. Most of the time I hate Ronald Weasley. So killing him off doesn't really bother me. I loved the way you made it seem very natural for Harry and Hermione to turn to each other in their grief. Bravo. |
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SearcySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/07
I so enjoy it when I see your name in the new and updated page...it means that I will be treated to a wonderful story. This piece is no exception. It was beautifully written...thank you so much for sharing. |
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Ivesia19Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/07
Really sweet and moving story. It felt very raw and natural. The line "She had found her forever" almost made me swoon. I can only hope to find such similar perfection in 5 days. |
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Thank-you for another delightful interlude of fluffiness. I enjoyed how easily and quickly they progressed from light kisses and friendly gestures to passionate embrace.
Thanks again. |
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the more mature love - yep, that's harry and hermione alright. I don't particularly like ron, but I hope he doesn't die (I don't want any of them to die) but if he did, harry would blame himself (of course) just like you wrote. another great story. |
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yet another beautiful one shot from you - can't wait to read more of your stories soon |
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/07
Very sweet, somewhat angsty little story. I still say that H/Hr are supposed to be together even in canon. Love your stories. |
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This was really sad but really good. I could feel the emotions running through them...especially the morning after when Hermione said "Hello" and Harry replied back "Hello"...so many emotions...so touching. GOOD JOB! |
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