That was BRILLIANT. Its really good, honestly. But I'm not much of a good reviewer am I? Probably not. Just gushing over how much I liked them prolly gets pretty old...  |
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AlanaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/08
how silly... but how fitting at the same time. Thank you for this enjoyable story. |
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I've read that story before... Many, many times. Are you the original author?
If not, they need credit... |
Author Feedback: Yes i am. it was written way last yr and put up on emma -watson.net and then fanfiction.net..... this has been beta'd and slightly re written.... |
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BrenUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/07
OMG...Harry seems so hot lol and he\\\'s so sexy in his quidditch robes xD
great fic!  |
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gti88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/07
A very well written story...Hermione\\\'s point of view was very...involved. 
Excellent, I really enjoyed reading it  |
Author Feedback: Thankyou very much..i hope you will like the rest of the chapters |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
This was so wonderful. I\'m so happy nowadays every time I see a new h/hr fanfic emerge! Harry and Hermione forever! Amazing job I hope you write more stories soon. |
Author Feedback: Thanks but this is not one shot. there are 3 more chaps awaiting to be proof read.... thankyou so much for reviewing....  |
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You are absolutely right! Love and Friendship always prevail! I really liked your story. So Hot! I love stories when Hermione goes ape over Harry in uniform.
"Everything about him oozed sex appeal and I was lost in a sea of emerald so vivid, that I had to blink and re-focus in the sunny haze." This line was brilliant. That line alone pulled me in. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much.. it is hard not to get lost in those eyes... i was fortunate enough to go and see Equus in London and well, those eyes haunt me to this very day..but as my ficlet goes? there is more, so much more. the original posting was just sex but i understand the need for a story per se.... i wil try and update by tuesday. thank you for taking the time to review
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
Great little one shot. Loving and warm, fliratious Harry and Hermione. Very nice |
Author Feedback: Hi thank you but it is not a one shot. it was orignally but it kind of grew and grew..lol what can i say? they are by far my fave couple and always will be, and those damned robes.lol  |
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much better than the last version. your beta did a good job and you did a good job on the rewrite. there seems to be something still that doesnt flow right tho. i reread it to try and pick it up but i can't place what it is. i think it maybe a bit rushed? or maybe slightly confusing as to what is happening and by who? i dont know but it is still very good and so much better. great job improving and good luck with anything more. you have great ideas and potential . |
Author Feedback: Thankyou very much... please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any idea's or suggestion on how i may improve this fic.... once again thanks for taking time to review
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Thats was funny. I think i loike how Hermione is obessed with those robes. I can't wait to read more of ur stories. Keep Writing. |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much... i will try andd not dissapoint you |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
*chuckle* Definitely quite a hot piece of work. It's good to see them together and very, very much in love, and lust, with each other. I thought her interest in the Quidditch robes was a nicely different approach for her psyche.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. |
Author Feedback: Thank you, it has been re written and beta'd so hopefully it will get better reviews and any suggestions are more than welcome... i write for fun... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
I liked this a lot and can't wait to see more from you |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much for taking the time to review... you will be seeing slot more i assure you, it just needs tweaking a little more. lol oh and the Quidditch robes thing? I myself had my hubby some made. lol.... suffice to say it is HE who was the inspiratuon for this fic, i just used my fave HP charatcers to act it all out |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
Its still a strange fic. I can see the difference with it, your beta did a better job. but it still feels...weird reading this.  better luck next time  |
Author Feedback: I'm not sure why you feel it is weird? in what way please? i find nothing strange about a husband and wife having fantasies... i assume your not wed and have no need to role play to keep the spice there???? there is nothing wrong with fantasy but your coments are duly noted... thank you for taking the time to leave as reveiw anyways
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Good work! I think you write wonderfully.. very hot and fluffy. Cheers! |
Author Feedback: Thankyou very much... i am with my new beta ,working on more of a plot per se i hope i do not dissapoint.. i jut love H/HR and those damned robes...lol |
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