AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 19/10/08
I've seen harry potter five!It's so cool!
I mean like somebody dies!And sadly it's harr\'s godfather!So sad,so sad....... |
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This story is great! I don't know where on earth you are, though. I really want to see what happens next! Just the concept of this story makes me laugh. A Club. Plus, I need to see them in their band! That's a real cliffy, sister! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 18/05/08
Are you still going to continue this story? Because the plot is very interesting, just like your other fanfics. |
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breakawaySigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 09/03/08
heyyy i love the story and ive always thought that draco/harry friendships have interesting dynamics... so please continue |
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This is an interesting concept. I like that instead of an IAMANGRYROAR!Harry, we see a real grieving Harry who is clearly in mourning and feeling real teenage feelings. It's a good characterization. |
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aminSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 21/02/08
i do not understand how thw fic is going on , the storyline seems unconnected at certain levels. however i would still take a look at the new chnpters to see how this turns out |
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Great chapter. That was a very nice sweet thing that Draco did for Lua. He's really trying to change but he's trying to hide it at the same time. Great story so far it's awesome. Keep up the amazing work. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
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Great chpater. Haha glad that Neville and Luna are getting along. Great story so far. |
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Yes a bit dramtic. Great chapter, the story is great. i'm glad that they are having some effect on Malfoy and getting him to chnage his ways. |
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I hope that they can change Malfoy so that he can help. McGonagall is going to kill Harry. But that's a good angle comparing voldemort to Hitler. Great story so far. |
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i love that that simple sign could attract so much attnetion. good start. |
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I like this universe. It proves that whilst it might be hard, Harry can cope without Ron and Hermione. The incident with the Thestrals also intrigued me to explore a Harry cum Luna friendship and I think you nailed it perfectly. Plus, you have a reformed Draco and jealous Hermione so all is well in the world. |
Author Feedback: Why thank you
I actually like this universe too. It was before everything shot downhill...
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tepiestarSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 29/12/07
i liked this chapter. not a whole lot of hermione, but i do love luna. the draco/luna friendship (or more if you'd like) works well too. the office part, with the grandparent like professors is less endearing on a second read (might just be me though). oh, and was harry so positively obvious about his love for hermione or was dumbledore just really good at non-invasive legimency? i like both scenarios actually. yay!! the club is back together. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I agree with you on the professor part. I think since Harry has Neville and Luna there's no need for guidance from Mc and Dumble, but I felt like I shouldn't just leave it like that. I used it in the beginning, used it in chapter 7, but I'm not sure if I'll use it again.
Dumbledore knew about Harry's love for Hermione since the beginning. Also, he was also an accomplished legimen, so perhaps...
Thanks for the review and stay with me until the end!
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