Oh my god..
That's a theroy in my decoding Harry Potter book..
Wouldn't that have been marvelous if indeed Harry woke up in the end only to go through Hogwarts?

Well, I can dream, can't I?
-Pour Toujours

awww no
okay, so, i like that you throw us a loop there at the end
but maybe you should ease into it more
like talk about how he falls/how he's lying on the ground when voldy kills him and then turn it into him lying in a bed.. you know what i mean?
other than that quick rush, i really liked this story. it has great merit and such sadness and such finality.

haha I liked this. It was the cliched 'dream' at the end, but with a twist to it; one that makes you wonder if he really got to do it over or it never haooen =]

OMG, you weren't kidding, but how could someone hate you for this? It's great! A much better ending than what JKR wrote and a chance for a whole new (better) series!

that was amazing. its a great take on the was DH may have turned out. although i would have been more than mad if that whole HP series turned out to be Harry dreaming haha. it would be unique, unexpexted- something j.k. rowling would do. great job

padfoot-puppyeyes:

At your request I will read your offerings and hopefully send on some constructive reviews. On a positive note your writing clearly evoked strong emotion in the reader. All senses of the battle field are conveyed in this chapter (i.e. visual, audio...) The chapter also flowed well to the end. Watch your sentence structure as some of your sentences are too long. I hope you have a great vacation in BC with your family and that you worked out the logistics with Deathly Hollows.

The MuggleMarauder

Hahaha... man, i thought at fist this was a sad ending fic--- was it supposed to be? and then, eleven-year old Harry Potter woke up, terrified, with nothing to remind him of his amazing and frightening dream but his oddly shaped scar... you made me laugh here! i dont know if its supposed to be funny but i think it is... really cute and well, unique... i also love your disclaimer note: \\\"If Harry Potter were mine, the story would never end.\\\" (well, me too! i dont want harry potter to end!)

Ah, the classic Bob Hope ending. You know, it's ironic. My co-workers and I were just saying the other day what we would do if JKR ending the series that way.

Thanks for giving me a laugh.

If she ended it like that I would......cry? Yeah that seems likely. But its an interesting twist and I think its a great story.

Oh, Merlin.
I actually yelled, "Oh, my God!"
Haha. Good show!
I loved it, I did. Great laughs.

that has got to be the coolest ending i have ever read! ill bet it is at least ten times better than the one that jk wrote!

*laughs* Oh, that last paragraph is wicked given all that's gone before. It reminds me, in a way, of "Nightmares of Future Past" and -that- is a good thing. That was a very nicely described battle and, sadly, it's the way I rather expect DH to end, with a mutual take-out. Depending on when during his 11th year that dream happens, it would be quite interesting to see how it affects his relationships.

Oh, she had better not end the series that way! That's just horrible and mean! You did well writing it, but I hope that the real DH doesn't end that way.

Thanks for posting, and good job. Keep up the great work!

Um...wow! That actually gave me chills. This would make a perfect ending to the seventh book...a lot more fans would be upset...if harry does end up, dieing, at the end. I like it very much so! Great job!

hye! that wz gud. i'm glad that 'arry is yet 2 die with a longing, if JKR hasn't done it already. well, atleast now there's a chance that his feelings cud b true abt. her, in here. this wz a nice (likely) unwritten ch., truly! iloved it! absolutely!