bradSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/07
Very nice! Getting rid of scar!horcrux, I assume! Good Trio warmth as well as H/Hr comfort, thanks! |
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That was beautiful! I love the subtle H/Hr and the wonderful trio bond. Well done!  |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
Hmm, an interesting short, here. Is this Harry taking Tom through the veil or Harry going into the veil with a "lifeline" to try and rescue Sirius. In the first case, it appears to have worked, but in the second, "nice try, no cigar". Still, the effort shown here obviously strengthed the feelings 'tween Harry & Hermione while not diminishing the friendship with Ron. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I really like Ron and would love to see the trio's friendship remain intact, regardless.
I was writing with the idea that Harry's scar is a Horcrux and he's trying to remove the soul fragment by sticking his head through the veil while Hermione and Ron hang onto him from the living side. He got sucked through, though, and the story is the aftermath of that. The Horcrux was removed and that's why Harry was experiencing so much pain in his forehead and why his forehead was bloody after he found his way out. Hope that helps. |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
That is such a great story! I wish there were more to it, but it's really good. Thanks so much for posting it, and keep up the great work!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much for reading and taking the time to review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
CFFB |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
This was a really good read. I particularly enjoyed your take on the environment behind the veil, it wasn't all paradise and roses as I've often read it.
Thanks for sharing. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I wanted to portray Harry as being in a place that he didn't belong, hence the not so welcoming environment.
I really hope life beyond the real veil will be paradise and roses. |
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atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
wow. Really deep stuff here. I think even if H/Hr doesnt happen in the end, the ending should be along the same line as this plot.
The friendship of the trio more than anything. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
I think I want for the ships to be resolved. I'm tired of all the bickering back and forth between them. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
Was he in the veil? Were they trying to get rid of the horcrux in his scar? That was really cool. I liked it! Templar did a good job, but I wish we had more.  |
Author Feedback: You're right on both counts.
Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Actually, I wrote it for Templar--sorry if that wasn't clear. |
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FoxSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
Very mysterious little one-shot. I'm still not entirely sure what happened, but I think I might have some idea.
Harry was a horcrux, so he went through the veil to get rid of the part of Voldemort's soul? Very interesting, loved how it was Hermione that was able to bring him back through. I've never read of Harry getting rid of it that way, it's very well thought out. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! You're right about what the trio was trying to accomplish. I've heard the idea of Harry trying to get rid of the Horcrux by sticking his head through the veil, but I didn't figure the veil would let him without something going awry. |
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