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Took your advice and turned on the old iPod and listened to "My Everything" which set the mood quite well I think. Mhm...A tub *raises eyebrows* have to let the boyfriend know bout that one.
*Kisses*
~Moony
BTW- Do you have a whole little concession stand over there stocked full of towels, tissues, and (hopefully) little bits of chocolate? Must find me one of these magical things... |
Author Feedback: I think the boyfriend might be open to...fresh ideas... 
This story is as much as your fantasy, as it is mine...the concession stand can be part of it.  |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/08
I'm not sure but I think I've read this before. Anyway, good job, really! A really hot one-shot.   |
Author Feedback: It's a fairly old fic, so chances are you have. 
Glad you like it...I'm thinking of ways to increase the hotness factor with the next story  |
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wow, this is great Love it! You\'re a really great author and for that, I shall give you..*tataa* a norwegian letter: æ
take good care of it...
No I\'m just kidding Great work, just what I needed, if you catch my drift (as you surely do) thanks... |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
This is probably my crowning smutfic...not sure if I've written anything better than it in the smut genre...
Thanks for the letter, and I'm glad the fic satisfied you...if you get my drift... |
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NovadestinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/07
well that certainly was a lemon wasn't it, next time you really should rate your links as Mature on one site is different from Mature on another and this type of story I doubt is actually allowed anywhere near HPFF.com hehe
but very, very luckily I do not mind this kind of story (as I will read anything) and I thought you did a good job of describing the moment. It was a rather nice little moment even though I think they were out of character. Good job still. |
Author Feedback: I said I was sorry, It's understandable that this story wouldn't be allowed on HPFF, and I have no plans to submit it there either
I'm a controversial writer Guess lady luck was on my side with you...still, I'm glad you liked the fic, because not everyone does...some find it amazing, and others raunchy...but I write what I want, and pleasing everybody is simply not possible. |
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Woo hoo! I swear I could feel the steam rising from that story! Nice one-shot! More please!  |
Author Feedback: Ah, then the effect has been reached Glad you like it I'm wrapping up A Strike Upon the Hour in the next few chapters, and then I might write another smutty oneshot... |
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shadowmanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/07/07
Really nice job witht this story. boy that scene with hermione and harry was good. keep writing cause u seem to be doing a good job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. Be on the lookout for the occasional smutfic...I'll be writing another one after the next chapter of A Second Turn |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/07
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Author Feedback: Continue when you like It only gets...more descriptive and hooking. If you know what I mean. |
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And once again you have written another brilliant story! Keep it up! |
Author Feedback: Thanks...I will keep it up |
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Nice and straightforward smut, which is what I needed today. Thanks!
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Author Feedback: You're welcome! |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/07
Like wow! I can really see him swaggering like that! lol!!! |
Author Feedback: Wow, I agree
Thanks for reading |
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Ok i'm a little confused. In the beginning were they a couple or Harry just decided to do what he did for that moment. Either way good on the writing. And I can't wait to read more of ur stories. Keep Writing. |
Author Feedback: I will keep writing...and whether they were a couple, or just friends, is entirely up to you...thanks for the positive review |
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Very sexy! That scene reminds me of how happy was when Harry was made Quidditch captain and was allowed to use the prefects bathroom.  |
Author Feedback: Certainly...and I'm glad you like the story |
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
Very interesting little one shot. Was this the first inkling that Harry and Hermione were going to get together, or just a sudden burst of passion? |
Author Feedback: See the last review... |
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/07
Very interesting little one shot. Was this the first inkling that Harry and Hermione were going to get together, or just a sudden burst of passion? |
Author Feedback: It was a planned fic, a moment in time, and it took me about a week to write, after about three drafts...Harry knows he will die, and Hermione is devastated...they are going to get together, or they may already be an item, but that's up to you to decide The story is with no string attached...just passion, and all else is open to interpretation... |
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Author Feedback: The fic is officially a one-shot....but I'll see, if I find enough of a plot line and time, I may consider continuing it...I'm glad you liked it. |
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