Well I really liked that. I loved the way that Ron stood up to Seamus. I didn't think that the characters were completely ooc. I could see Seamus saying something like that. Lovely job. I am not seeing the movie..I hae to work, but I want ot see it as soon as possible!!!

I think this could turn into a longer story if you wanted to. I know I want to know if they have a baby, if voldy dies, if harry lives. I have lots of questions I would want answers to.

I think this could turn into a longer story if you wanted to. I know I want to know if they have a baby, if voldy dies, if harry lives. I have lots of questions I would want answers to.

This was really nice to read. It was actually really believable (IMHO). I can identify with Harry somewhat and I think that he very well could have broken down and cried in her arms. Also - I think that the idea of Hermione carrying his child was a nice anchor for the story. I liked it. Also - it is totally *in* character that both Harry and Hermione would wait to give their virginity to each other. He loves her that much that he would want to protect her that way and I believe - and JKR be damned, that Hermione loves him that much, too.

SO - good job writing this. You should be really proud.

Regards,

the_scribbler

aww...how sweet,, i love the plot! its so easy to imagine...i know you said this was a one shot, but can you at least think about doing another chapter? i think a lot of your readers would like one also!

This wasn't the best one-shot I've ever read but this certainly wasn't the worst. I know you're probably thinking something like 'oh no, not one of those damn flamers' because I'm not. I honestly don't know what my exact feelings on this was. But I think I can safely say that I like your other stories better than this.
I understand that Harry wants Hermione to live and bore his child but I felt as if you didn't built up on that. It would have been better if you included more.

BUT (do not groan, it's not bad )I did, however, like the last line.

So yes, I want to see more from you so adieu, adios, c ya later, goodnight.

Viopathartic

I liked it a lot. You are a great writer. I can't wait to see the movie tomorrow!

I loved it!! It was different and i liked that they didnt think that Harry and Hermione were going out. I realllllllly think that u should add more LOL!!! like if he really got her pregenant and others reactions to it. LOL Either way I loved It!!!

Awwww, this was such a nice one shot. It was soo sweet, and I really felt bad 4 Harry.