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you rock, dude!! and i don't know how many times i've sent u a review on how u totally rock...i love ur fics and this fic is kinda sad....and cute too!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/01/08
This story is so cute and it is so sweet and fluffy. |
Author Feedback:  Thanks.
I have the sudden urge to have cotton candy now. :/ Oh well. (Get it? Sweet and fluffy?) Oh well, I'll just get some of my friend's fudge... MMmmmm...
*cough* uh, yeah. Thanks for the review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/10/07
Poor Harry and Hermione...they can't even be in a relationship without people thinking they aren't in one. Can't wait for the next chpater to see if Harry got Hermione pregnant. Hopefully it won't take long to write chapter 2. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Obviously you prolly know that the second one is up. :-P I'm such a slow replier when it comes to One Shots.
But thanks, and you too! God bless.  |
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kimUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/08/07
hey great story.and yes i did see the movie it was really great.as for the book i read it the day it came out and finished it the next day.i did not like the epilogue to the book though.as i said your story was really great. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
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That's just screaming for a sequel!!! Please write a sequel or if not a sequel, another fic, I'm loving all of your fanfics. |
Author Feedback: Hey its you! I just replied to you!
I wrote one, and I betchya anything--or something--you already reviwed.
Thanks for the review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/07/07
Awe this can\'t be a one shot! Sequel then? Like after Voldemort? |
Author Feedback: I'm working on chapter two right now. No, it won't be after Voldemort, but a few months after school is finished. That's all the spoilers you're getting outta me right now.
Thanx for the review!!!
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GOODSOUPUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/07/07
WOAHHHHH...I LIKE IT  WHEN I READ UR COMMENT ABOUT EVRYONE THINKING THEY WERE WRONG 4 EACH OTHER I WAS LIKE...IM NOT GONNA LIKE THIS...BUT THIS FIRST CH WAS GOOD, KEEP IT UP. |
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Honestly, I'm feeling very confused after this. For me, it just didn't flow and it felt like you had the pregnancy plot bunny and wrote everything to fit around it.
Some of your dialogue, though, is very realistic for fumbling teenagers. |
Author Feedback: No, I actually didn't have that plot bunny. It sort of sprang up on me, because Harry would be willing to do anything to ensure Hermione did nothing to hurt herself. And since they were already dating, and Harry really loves her, he thought that would be a reasonable resolution.
I'm sorry if you didn't like it, but I'm glad that you didn't flame me.
SwishAndFlick31 |
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SarahUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/07
I loved this!!! This is an awesome story!!! Oh, and here’s a message non review related, but it is very important to Harry/Hermione shippers.
We all want harry and Hermione to get together in the seventh book, right? Let's face it, JKR is not going to allow this in her book. Not to disrespect her authority, but I find that this is a huge mistake. There is no way Harry Potter can live on without Harmony.
Since this month is the release of movie five, it is as they said in the commercials "The rebellion against the ministry". Well, that's not the only rebellion going on. There's also the "Harmony Rebellion". It is time for us to protect and protest our ship!
What We Are going to do:
1. We will be co-authoring our version of Deathly Hallows with a bunch of h/hr obsessed fanfic writers. This group will be known as the "Harmony Rebellion".
2. We will need a place to talk about our fanfic, and discuss and agree with our fellow co-authors, what will be written. We will also need a place to post our fanfic. My plan is to create our own web-site. I'm not sure how to do this or even if it is possible. Maybe someone could make like a blog where we can all meet on and write?
3. Once we have created our story, we're gonna post it on all the HP fanfic sites we can. Then, in an author's note, we will tell everyone to go to our "website".
4. On our website, we will have them sign a pitition, saying that our fanfiction was better than the real book seven.
5. When we get enough people, we'll mail it to, well, maybe the movie makers of the HP films? Or a news crew? Anything to let people know about our protest.
I know what you're thinking. It's impossible. I disagree. I truly believe that we can do this. Our fanfiction has to be so good that we will be able to convince non harmony shippers that this is better than the real DH. And if it doesn't work, at least we'll have fun writing the fanfic.
So what do you think? Want to join? Would others want to? Please let me know what you think ASAP.
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Author Feedback: Wow, long...
I don't know if I want to join, actually. I don't really care too much if Harry and Hermine get together in the seventh and final book. I mean, they're just fictional characters!
But, I dunno...
Thanks for the review! |
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asjaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/07
I loved this story!!! It's great that you didn't follow the same pattern others mostly do. I did want to see the reactions of all of those who said that they weren't dating, in my twisted imagination it would be great if someone maybe caught them together , not in 'the act',but just in a cupboard. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading it. Good job!
The movie is coming to my country on the 19th, but I'm getting the book on July 20th 00:00. |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/07
Now I like this one. It was believable, well, to me anyways. *G* But I did hear on my radio station the other morning that JKR is saying that the 7th book may not be the end of the series...we shall see. My son is hoping to go see the movie on Friday with his cousins, I told him I wouldn't go to it for a few weeks, I *hate* crowds. *G*
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SochSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/07
A good one-shot. It does seem a little odd that even Ron hasn't seem them kiss at all, though.
BTW, I do not think you type-raped the characters much at all. You are within the realm of plausible characters... barely though.
I'm also glad for the lack of typos/mistakes in language. I always appreciate a well edited piece - be it author edited, or not. (I have no idea with this piece, but t was well done, either way)
Thank you for sharing with us, and keep up the good work.
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Author Feedback: Well, remember, Harry and Hermione wouldn't want to cause any discomfort for their friend. And I think kissing would be in that discomfort catagory. Y'know what I mean?
Whoo! First time I haven't type-raped them!! WHOO! Sorry, shutting up now.
Yeah, this was edited, and I don't really have a beta per-se. Usually I'll just type it and upload it, totally forgetting about proofreading it since I'm wayy too hyped to get it up.
Thanx for the review, though! |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/07
Weird plot line there ... but good none the less.
That was amazing !
Keep up the good work ! |
Author Feedback: Thanx! |
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sarahmaySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/07
Okay...first off, I really can't see this happening, although I think the idea is really sweet. I don't really think this is too out of character - so good job on that (I tried that recently too..getting sick of all the ooc-ness)!
The bit where Harry was asking her what she would do without him was just *sigh*..
Overall it was really good and I can't wait to see more from you!
BTW - the movie isn't too bad...the last 5 minutes is worth it all! |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/07
No, not out of character. Actually, that sounds just like something Harry would do to try and "protect" Hermione. I wonder how long it'll tkae the rest of seventh year Gryffindor, and the rest of the school, to realize that they are totally serious about and committed to each other? Down to the most intimate level of committment possible? Well, perhaps that should be will they realize this before Hermione starts physically demonstrating her committment to Harry? |
Author Feedback: Remember they've still got the idea that they're like mother and son. (Odd, eh?) There's only about two more weeks of their school, and they'll prolly never (okay, not never, but a few months) see H/Hr again.
*Shrug.* Perhaps we'll see what happens if I decide to make another chapter.
Thanx for the review, though! |
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