Oh Lord, this was so beautiful, incredible, you did a wonderful job, they are so perfect for each other. Thank you for a wonderful read!!!

DUDE!!!!!!!!!! That was sooo damn good!!!! lol. I looove it *adds to favs* YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, enough of the "!!!'s" right?
Anyway, you rock, awesome fic. Words can't describe how good it was =D

Oh, beautiful, beautiful story. I love to see Hermione like this, sure of herself and hera abilities. Her power over Harry. Very well done !

I love your writing. This story was so cute. I just wonder why he waited so long to say it back to her- he clearly had already come to the realization of his feelings.

Oh wow, you're such an amazing writer *sigh* I loved this fic. And it started so innocently... Though I did suspect that Hermione began doing it on purpose after a while. She isn't the smartest witch of her age for nothing, after all.

Also, I think you have this amazing writing style. It's not messy, it makes sense, etc. You're officially one of my favorite authors!

I already read this earlier on your LJ.

Awesome One Shot there ... nice addition to the absolutely HUGE and GREAT collection of your fics.

Waiting for more ....

Wow, that was just... Wow!!! Not only was this hot, but you made it very sensual as well. I have not seen many that have been able to pull those two things together in a story as well as you did in this one. Excellent work!

PA

Very sweet and nice. Just enough passion and enough tenderness to make me smile. Lovely job at this.

That was intensely hot and totally believeable. It seems that whatever had built up between them for so long finally developed enough energy to break down the barriers for both of them and let them see what was there. I'm not surprised that she really caught on first, we blokes aren't usually that aware at that age (and some never are, but I digress). Now the thought that intrigues me is what Ron will say/do if he comes home and finds them like that? Lots of potential here for further development if you wish.

It was beautiful! So amazing well written. I absolutely loved every word. I'm at a loss at how to compliment you, really. Top notch work. There's an obvious reason as to why you're on my favorite authors list!

Your work never ceases to amaze me! AMAZING JOB!!! I loved it!

I have about five authors I enjoy almost unconditionally on Portkey, and you are certainly one of them. I just don't think anyone else is as prolific as you while retaining the same excellent quality of writing throughout nearly every fic. You are an excellent ficlet writer and I feel you've been able to make fics of every rating readable and entertaining for an adult audience. Please keep up the great work!


Re: "Seduced": Perfect. Flawless. Loved it.

You can NEVER have too many stories about Harry and Hermione's first time. Always fun to read. They are just so right for each other.

I hope after book 7 and the terrible things JK does to our group.....someone will come behind her and write 7 more books.....but do it right and let them live and grow up. I have enjoyed these stories sooo much more than the original.

I am one of the angry people that think JKR should be nice to us....the ones who have made her a billionare and keep going..or more so let someone ELSE write more books.

I do enjoy your stories and I hope you will continue to write long after book 7 has broken all our hearts!

Ok seriously you're work is AMAZING!! I think that was by far the sweetest smutty fic I have ever read!! I just absolutely loved it!! You are an incredible writer and by far my favorite author here! I can't wait to read your next fic!

Cute. I liked how you had this all arranged into the story and even more how Hermione 'seduced' Harry....

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