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Hey u always do this kind of story.Sometimes it will get boring

AMAZING, I have to say this was one of the sweetest and sexiest stories I've ever read, you did an excelent job.

Goodness! That was quite hot! I loved the whole seduction theme because it was so innocent...and yet so not. Great characterizations. A very sweet story. One I'll be reading over and over and over. This is the kind of story that I put on my favorites list just to read as a pick-me-up when I've had an off day or just feel like a little smut. Great job!

love the story, PLEASE up date really soon :]
I love how u detailed this

Stories like this is why you're one of my favorite authors - you always live up to expectations. I am quite partial to the whole "Hermione testing Harry's control" plot device. It's fun to imagine him grinding his teeth together and praying to every deity he knows to keep his self control. It's even more fun when he loses the battle...

OMFG! how do u do it!? u always manage to make me melt with the sweet emotion that harry and hermione have. i love how the first part fowed. it was actually funny, then the middle was hot! but the ending was the icing on the cake for me.

And those three words filled all the empty spaces in his heart, which he hadn’t even known, until now, were empty.

yay - that was just one perfect line in a fantastic one-shot. i love your fics!

That was simply perfection. What a great one-shot! Whenever I see an update from you it totally makes my day. This is just another one of your fics that will be placed on my favorites list! Loved it!

This was amazingly written. Great job. I don't usually read NC 17 fics but this was great, especially without almost any plot. Great work!

I... just... bah. Lol. Oh boy, do I miss my girlfriend. lovely... extremely well written

Alex

Awwwww! It was relly beautiful and sweet! I love your writing and can't wait for new story
AWESOME!!!

Hermione tending to Harry was sweet and fluffy, a very nice start. Harry trying to hide his reaction was funny, and Hermione figuring it out anyway and calling him on it was even better. I particularly liked the line about the height to stupidity. The flirting was great. And okay, this was hot. Very, very hot. And very well written too.

I have to say that is my favourite short story of yours.

this one was somehow different to your others - even more intimate if thats possible.
hehe.

Thanks!!

Awww... that was sweet, the ending when she hears his words.