RicciUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/07
Please tell me that there is a sequel to this in the works...This was awesome! |
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niiicce, well good oneshot! I didn't think Ginny was that... spylike and dirty, but when a girl wants some, she gets some. Nice talk with Luna and Hermione. I hope Ginny does do something stupid, she deserves it!
-Amanda |
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DJ32Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/07/07
You do good work with the Hermione and Luna combo it's alot a fun. |
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ArimaiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/07/07
Good story I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You know this could serve as a background to a whole new story. I wonder if you would mind if I wrote a story from this point. Nah... It'd probably be banned for a ridiculously high rating rofl. |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/07/07
Wow - Great story! Hermione and Luna have a great relationship and I love the way you portrayed it. Ginny was stupid - and she would do something stupid. I like how Harry quietly told Molly that she was a guest and reminded her that he invited Luna and he was the one that had the actual say. Awesome job! |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/07/07
Hmm... I wonder what stupis thing will Ginny do to try to get Harry back. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/07/07
That was incredibly cool to see how they got together like that. I also like to see how Ginny and Molly were still trying to scheme something up.  They(H/Hr) are such an awesome couple. |
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Hermione is being very...direct. I suppose at a certain level of frustration (which we did not see building due to the nature of the story) one can just want to make things very clear so that people will stop hinting, but still I'm not sure Hermione went about it the best way. You can compliment someone while telling them to shove it, or you can insult them (e.g. telling someone they are a bad parent).
When you believe someone is obsessed, letting them too close may not be the best idea either.
Anyway, it was a nice story despite my complaints. Please keep writing.
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Ginny's a nasty little thing isn't she.... lol Okay well this was a good story and I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
*%* Susanna *%* |
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FiaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/07
Ginny is such an idiot! She will just have to grasp the idea of Harry and Hermione together. And not her and Harry. Somewhere she is only in love with THE Harry Potter not just Harry as Hermione is. Of course it hurts being in love with someone who is not loving you in return. But one have to let it go... |
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I think the Molly and Ginny bashing were a bit on the extreme side, but the fic was really good none the less. I totally loved how Hermione busted Ginny right after... Even I felt "crunchy"... |
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lots and lots of wow there - too mad that Ginny's grip on reality is so weak. Damage from the Voldie stuff, too spoiled and pampered by Mom?? - Or just plain stupid?
Harry and Hermione forever
thanks |
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HHR227Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/07
I really enjoyed this story. I thought that both couples were presented very realistic and sweet. Keep up the great work! |
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Nice one-shot.
Your Molly is painfully overbearing and single-minded....it got to the point where I almost couldn't bring myself to see what she'd say or do next (I wanted to reach into the computer screen and shake some sense into her). I have no patience for the woman, which is probably why she's essentially written out of my fanfics.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/07
it was ok,but you made all of them look, and seem like evil bitches, mrs.weasley is like harrys second mother, he even says so in the books, i think this story just needs to be lightened up.thats all |
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