That was incredibly cool to see how they got together like that. I also like to see how Ginny and Molly were still trying to scheme something up. They(H/Hr) are such an awesome couple.

Hermione is being very...direct. I suppose at a certain level of frustration (which we did not see building due to the nature of the story) one can just want to make things very clear so that people will stop hinting, but still I'm not sure Hermione went about it the best way. You can compliment someone while telling them to shove it, or you can insult them (e.g. telling someone they are a bad parent).

When you believe someone is obsessed, letting them too close may not be the best idea either.

Anyway, it was a nice story despite my complaints. Please keep writing.

Ginny's a nasty little thing isn't she.... lol Okay well this was a good story and I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

*%* Susanna *%*

Ginny is such an idiot! She will just have to grasp the idea of Harry and Hermione together. And not her and Harry. Somewhere she is only in love with THE Harry Potter not just Harry as Hermione is. Of course it hurts being in love with someone who is not loving you in return. But one have to let it go...

I think the Molly and Ginny bashing were a bit on the extreme side, but the fic was really good none the less. I totally loved how Hermione busted Ginny right after... Even I felt "crunchy"...

lots and lots of wow there - too mad that Ginny's grip on reality is so weak. Damage from the Voldie stuff, too spoiled and pampered by Mom?? - Or just plain stupid?

Harry and Hermione forever
thanks

I really enjoyed this story. I thought that both couples were presented very realistic and sweet. Keep up the great work!

Nice one-shot.

Your Molly is painfully overbearing and single-minded....it got to the point where I almost couldn't bring myself to see what she'd say or do next (I wanted to reach into the computer screen and shake some sense into her). I have no patience for the woman, which is probably why she's essentially written out of my fanfics.

it was ok,but you made all of them look, and seem like evil bitches, mrs.weasley is like harrys second mother, he even says so in the books, i think this story just needs to be lightened up.thats all

Awesome !
The H/Hr and R/L parts were just so .... good that I'm at a loss of words for it.

BTW do you always portray Ginny as such a b*tch ? And Molly as wanting a BHWF ?

Anyway keep writing !

That was a really hot and very awesome story. Lovely job! I really liked it. Great. Poor Ginny...so dumb.

Sweet.......I love this story. I guess it's AU because I don't think Harry would ever blow up at Molly, but I liked his speech nonetheless. Next time you do a one shot.........maybe keep it in this same sort of context????

This is a one shot? I think it would be interesting to add an epilogue at least...to say what Ginny did and how many children Harry & Hermione did end up with...it would be cute if their first set were twins.

This is a wonderful little story. Looks like the trio plus one (Luna) have matured into adulthood. I enjoyed it very much. However you did leave a slight opening for a sequel or a 2nd chapter since Ginny still hasn't gotten it through her head yet, or Molly either.

I have a confession to make. I started to read this without noticing who the author is. Half way through I was getting all steamed up and ready to write a stinging review accusing the author of copying your ideas and writing style. Then I noticed you are the author!

Seriously though this was a great little story and if you decided to continue it I would be very pleased. It was a bit odd having Ginny watch while H/Hr made love and get turned on by it, but I guess that was the ultimate humiliation. I liked the way Harry dealt with Molly too. It's interesting that in your Lions universe Molly is quite a sympathetic figure but your more recent stories have been much harder on her.