papermaskUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/12/07
i hope he never leaves. she can help him through anything. very beautiful story. i love it.  |
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lovely one-shot. looking forward to reading more of your fics soon |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/10/07
this is really good. i love it. definitely a favorite story.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Favorite'd, huzzah! As for my review on At Your Doorstep, I'm glad you liked my advice. I didn't want to come off as all-knowing or anything. I'm still learning myself. |
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Author Feedback: My English teacher always taught us that the last line should leave an impression, so I can only thank her on that note. Thank you very much for reviewing and giving my short fic a chance! |
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'I'd never find another woman even if I lived a dozen more lifetimes' *dead*
That was absolutely briliant! Beautiful! Have no others words for it
But it´d be a great idea to come up with a longer fic. Lots of angst hehehe
I loved it!
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Author Feedback: OMG, you have to live for DH! *revives* I'm not sure if I could do long term angst. Maybe one day. Thanks for reiviewing! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/07
That was really cute. It was very short, but very sweet. Nice job. |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/07
What a wonderful character study of Harry. Your Harry is so tired, worn from what he suffered and all the expectations still piled on him. I hurt for him regarding Molly blaming him for her sons' deaths--and I also thought she was very in character for that. But it was Hermione that made it. I adored how Harry was so ready to just leave, and she stopped him by offering to let him go. And the last line was absolutely perfect, about how it's not so easy to leave. Thanks! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! As much as I'd love to see a rosy future for him, he's going to have a hard time adjusting to world where there's not a huge society out to kill him. Imagine waking up every day expecting to hear the worst and then it be gone in just a second. That's a huge frame of mind to get out of. I think Hermione has always given him what he needs--help, trust, and understanding. Let's hope she keeps doing that. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/07
Short, but absolutely stunning.
A wonderful portrayal that (to me) seems much closer to what the characters are than then Superman!Harry and Superpowers!Hermione that are seen in other fics. |
Author Feedback: I do have a weakness for Super!Harry.  But I'm glad that you found this realistic for him. Thanks for the review! |
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That was a nice litle one-shot. It conveyed tons of emotions in just those short paragraphs. Very well written, I totally loved it! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I didn't notice that there were three paragraphs until you pointed it out. Weird, huh? |
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snv87_30Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/07
I liked it a lot. I can't wait to read more from you. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'll try not to let you down. |
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This very sweetly shows how Hermione is an anchor in Harry's life. She has been a calming constant since Neville lost his toad so long ago on the Hogwart's Express. Very sweet ... good job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I hope she continues to do that in DH. Only a few more days! |
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You can bet that Hermione would be the only one to make Harry stay.
It was a beautiful shot.
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Author Feedback: You know it. Thanks for reviewing! |
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So very touching and poignant. I liked it a lot! |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/07
Short, but sweetly poignant and quite effective. I like the way that, with so much driving him to leave, Hermione provides the grounding that keeps him there and sane. I'd wager a guess that, though he may not realize it, he likely does the same for her. 'Tis always that way in a good, strong relationship. |
Author Feedback: You'd be right about Harry being Hermione's anchor. If he left or if he had died, what reason would she have to stay? None, obviously, and she stays because he chooses to come back for her.  They are so awesome. Thanks for reviewing! |
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You know...that wasn't what I expected it to be. I expected the ending to be...different. And I'm glad it wasn't different because I find I would have perfered this ending much better to any other one. =) I liked this story very much. It made me smile. |
Author Feedback: Well, I'm glad it could make you smile even if the ending was...non-different.  Thanks for reviewing. |
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