come on you can not leave us hanging like that, please give us another chapter!make it a 3 shot or more, will she leave ron when she finds out about what we all know hes going to do at the party?and will harry tell her the truth?what about the weasleys?ginny?what will they think about hermione and harrys love?

The one shot like greed or envy are really great ! I suppose you gonna make other with the name of all the sins.. I can't wait to read them all.

Interesting twist; I can honestly say that I never saw it coming. And it was quite refreshing, to see Harry actually be the instigator of events rather than a bystander. Heck, instigator really isn't right, he's the manipulator, and the best part is he's doing it for selfish reasons.

Bravo for crafting a story with a nice twist with a believable yet original take on Harry's character

Chris

WHOA. That\'s intense. there are a few sentences that need to be reworded, but other than that, it\'s fabulous. When are you going to try and finish MIT? I hope soon or that other story you had started... that looked hilarious!

You have to write another chapter for this! You can't just leave it like this because...it's amazing! Please write another chapter, please!!!

unbefuckinglievable. knocking this one out of the park. fits in canon, thank you very much, jkr, without that damn epilogue - the characters are voiced so well. well done.

This is an great story an of course we think we know were it is going, but might there be another chapter ever in the works?

Excellent chapter. I like seeing Harry be a little bad once in a while.

I do love your stories so. Just think only a couple of weeks till the 7th and final HP book. I hope jo didn't kill off Hermione but I have a dreadful feeling that she did. Maybe there will be alternate universes.

wonderfully written, but you should write more! It seems somewhat incomplete, I want to know what happens next

This was really good but it'd be great if you would work on more important things...literally lol

Excellent! I didn't expect the twist at the end but it was fabulous. It is good to hear from you again too!!

Hmmm... a manipulative Harry. Guess that's a new one. The writing of the story was excellent, as usual. I would have liked to see more background on Harry's history... did he hook up with Ginny (ugh!)? Has he been behind all of Ron's dalliances, as implied? Also, does this really qualify as ending H/Hr per pk rules? You just might have to write more...

Twitchy you out did yourself. That was one heck of a twist at the end. I loved it. I wish this wasn't just a one shot though. I would love to see what happens next. Well done!

Wow I love the dark harry personna. You want to scream that he is evil for actually arranging the demise of his best friend's marriage but you kinda understand where he is coming from which takes us to onother question of what does that say about you, and that i believe is what a darkfic is all about so good work