Love the sexy Harry! I just discovered fan fiction and H/Hr, so I'm looking fwd to reading the rest of your fics.

oh my god!!! please!!!asequel please!!! for this hot hot HOT fic!!! i so love this!!! which is the next chapter??? please?!!!

Was randomly looking over some fic reviews and saw a flame posted here. Have deleted it. I've also changed this story's status from "in progress" to "completed" since your summary indicates it's a one-shot. Many readers like myself avoid WIPs.

I've heard so much praise of your work in the Fic Recs forums. Will come back and read your shorter stories sometime; I'm on a years-long hiatus from reading long stories.

Man this is terrible, I mean, their situation, the writing is great! Loved it, but I feel so bad... it's the bad thing about the cheating stories... anyway, great done! I enjoyed reading it, and Harry's so evil, lol I would've done the same were I a man and the woman I love is with another one hehe...

That is the best fic I have read so far. Love to see another chapter but it stands up as is. Awesome story

Another fic of yours that needs another chapter! Ron needs his comeuppance...you've set it up perfectly - so write it for *&^%$ sake. Please, for all your fans!

this story can actually stand up on its own but a new chapter would be very very appreciated! hehehe.. and yeah, i'm kinda tired of reading harry as a very noble and unselfish man. it's kinda cool to read something like this.. i love it really.. and i think i've already made a review for this before.. lol!

=Laaaaaaa= (That's the sound of angels singing coz I found your writing.) I've been trawling Portkey & fanfic for some GOOD HHr fic, something original with a sense of humor, something REALISTIC for gods sake. I found it in this! I LOVED this chapter. I know this is probably pretty old and I don't know if u still write but when I appreciate, I review and so there u go. Thank u!!!

That was... amazing. I can't believe I didn't find this story sooner.

" The glass shattering at the table was me. I couldn't stand the thought of Hermione having his children. I see her and I see the mother of my children. "

You are definatly one of the best authors on portkey and I hope you contiunue writing.

Sincerely, Pigwidgeon

omg soooo awesome just like everything else u write Please update soon!!

Oh my!!! This little ficlet is most certainly enticing! I liked that you provided for Harry's pov at the end.

i'm not a huge fan of stories involving sex as a main theme, but this was really good. i liked it a lot. i think you could go either way when it comes to adding another chapter or just sticking with a one shot.

i really love where this is going and cannot wait for an update

Wee, I love these types of oneshots. The way you make Harry just a normal male is great since a lot of stories out there make Harry to be this macho hero who always saves the day.

adore adore adore this fic, wanted to add ti to faves so reviewed again