Man this is terrible, I mean, their situation, the writing is great! Loved it, but I feel so bad... it's the bad thing about the cheating stories... anyway, great done! I enjoyed reading it, and Harry's so evil, lol I would've done the same were I a man and the woman I love is with another one hehe...

That is the best fic I have read so far. Love to see another chapter but it stands up as is. Awesome story

Another fic of yours that needs another chapter! Ron needs his comeuppance...you've set it up perfectly - so write it for *&^%$ sake. Please, for all your fans!

this story can actually stand up on its own but a new chapter would be very very appreciated! hehehe.. and yeah, i'm kinda tired of reading harry as a very noble and unselfish man. it's kinda cool to read something like this.. i love it really.. and i think i've already made a review for this before.. lol!

=Laaaaaaa= (That's the sound of angels singing coz I found your writing.) I've been trawling Portkey & fanfic for some GOOD HHr fic, something original with a sense of humor, something REALISTIC for gods sake. I found it in this! I LOVED this chapter. I know this is probably pretty old and I don't know if u still write but when I appreciate, I review and so there u go. Thank u!!!

That was... amazing. I can't believe I didn't find this story sooner.

" The glass shattering at the table was me. I couldn't stand the thought of Hermione having his children. I see her and I see the mother of my children. "

You are definatly one of the best authors on portkey and I hope you contiunue writing.

Sincerely, Pigwidgeon

omg soooo awesome just like everything else u write Please update soon!!

YOu fucking suck learn how to finish what you fucing started. I fucking hate writers like you all you do is give up, why write and then give up pretty pointless your life is ahahahahahahahaha

Oh my!!! This little ficlet is most certainly enticing! I liked that you provided for Harry's pov at the end.

i'm not a huge fan of stories involving sex as a main theme, but this was really good. i liked it a lot. i think you could go either way when it comes to adding another chapter or just sticking with a one shot.

i really love where this is going and cannot wait for an update

Wee, I love these types of oneshots. The way you make Harry just a normal male is great since a lot of stories out there make Harry to be this macho hero who always saves the day.

adore adore adore this fic, wanted to add ti to faves so reviewed again

OH MY FLIPPING GOSH! This story was to die for! Naughty Harry. I LOVE LOVE LOVE. HOT sex scene!

I'm not usually a fan of first person writing cause I think its trickier to write and as such more prone to failure but you executed both this piece and Envy flawlessly. I love your characterizations and the raw emotion you manage to convey. Fabulous work! I'm off to check out your other fics.