Wow that was wonderful writing!!
it would be better if you write a sequel!

Well, I think that...Goodness, you're such an amazing writer! I can never get tired of your fics! I diligently read 'Soul Pieces', 'Love, Lies and a Secret' and 'Belong to Nowhere', though I admit I have yet to read 'Here, There and Everywhere' though I bet it's as good as your other ones. Really, I just love your writing style and all that. ^^ Yep, I liked it!! I most certainly did.

It wasn't very long, but it didn't need to be. The beginning had me a bit confused, but that could just be me and being tired. I think it's a good story. I like the last bit about what he was going to say in the morning and how simple it was to break that agreement...there wasn't a ton of discussion, it was just a question and an answer - no fluff added around it to dampen it's meaning.

That was a great little one-shot! Totally awesome. Your writting is incredibly consistant, and quite a pleasure to read. Love, love loved it!

Real sweet and cute for a smut fic I like it especially the introduction where they pretet to their friends.

Good chapter.Update soon. I like this idea. It seems like something Harry and Hermione would do. Start a new story soon.(So I don't go nuts before Deathly Hallows.Re-reading the whole series is working,but it's taking me forever to get through Goblet of Fire.I started reading book one on Saturday(and got sunburned in the process)and started book four on Sunday. Hopefully,I should be finished with book six by the end of this week.

What do I think? Well I think that you did a great job you should be happy with what you have done with this story. Thanks for writing it.

Additional Review:

First, sorry for my former review, I didn't notice the status is 'complete'.

By the way, now I know you can write a 'light' story and you've done great job. This one is really sweet and romantic. Also, HIS love for HER in the story is not filled with hurt and misunderstanding, that I don't think it called 'love' as the other stories of yours. THIS ONE is true love inspite of its starting from 'lust'. You impressingly showed HIS love and care for HER through your descriptions such as:

'It had started in some slowed, leisured movement as if he was trying to print in his mind the feeling of her around him.'
'He would never forget their first time, in one of the Leaky Cauldron’s rooms. It had been the first time that he had felt alive, his mind away from the war, the deaths. And it seemed so safe, so secure.'
'And just before the sleep finally claimed him, Harry thought of the first thing he would say to her in the next morning.
“I love you, Hermione.”'

Sadly, for me (please note: Only For Me), you seemed to prefer some hurtful-and-misunderstanding kind of love, as you've written in most of your stories. So wish to see some truely romatic story like this.

Please Note: Just a Comment, not a Critic.

I thought it will be better than this as you write part 2.

Note to Harry and Hermione: never enter the presence of a lycanthrope immediately after a round of wild monkey sex; you WILL get busted! Nice little one-shot; not entirely in character, but the idea of a 'friends-with-benefits' relationship developing between Harry and Hermione, especially during the tense frnetic times at the end of the war, isn't that far-fetched, any more than that it would evolve into something more once the war was past. Nice work.

Hmm, I think that they've most likely both crossed the line for "Friends with Benefits" to Lovers and I doubt they'll be going back. Not, IMHO, that this is a bad thing as it sounds like they suit each other quite nicely.

I enjoyed the story, itself, it built nicely and the steamy parts were sufficient without getting overly explicit.

It's never just sex. It may start that way but, it never does stay there, it just seems to grow somehow when your not looking I guess.

That was a great fic! Wow-o-wow. Very hot and sexy. Wonderful. There was a lot of despertaion in it...very awesome.

Maybe you could make this a two-shot? Let us avid ficlet readers have an epilogue of sorts. Hermione's POV or her reaction to Harry's morning confession. I actually shouldn't be asking for anymore fanficiton. I read too much of it as it is, but alas, I have no life so here I sit at the computer.

Wow, amazing! So HOT! I hope this is not just a one-shot because your writing is amazing. I love hhr fics that start out with them needing eachother just for release and realizing that it was always about love! So, more, more, more!!!Please?