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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/07/07
*squeal* awww thats so.... awwww! would you be making a sequal to this? please!!!!??!
 

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Particle_Accelerator
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/07
Nice work, but you seem to have lost the accompanying picture. Can you repost it?
Author Feedback: Lost? But the drawing is still there (just click on the link to my LJ). Maybe when you tried the LJ was slow/down.

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Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/07
OH thisis a great little piece so far???? And Wow I need an iceberg to cool down now. These two are sneaky and I loved it More please with big kitty eyes.
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/07
nox canceles lumos...i like the story, but the nox at the end of it is a bit confusing...whatever floats your boat...
Author Feedback: Nox- night- the end of the day- closing the curtains- a metaphor for end.
The same as Finis/Finale/The End.
And I am not even the first person to use this.
Sorry, but I really can't see what is so confusing about it.
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/07
f f f f f f f ff ff f f f f f
 

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TiffANY
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/07
This story is so sweet

I love it!

You have to continue

PLEASE!
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/07
that was a really good story! I liked it a lot! Especially the end.
 

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lil_irish_girl
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/07
oh, i loved it! so much smutty goodness. keep up the awesome work!!

lil_irish_girl
 

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Zeelthor
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/07
It's good, really. A bit of a flashback to explain how it all started would be nice.
Author Feedback: This is a PWP.

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Lizz
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/07
Oh wow! I loved it! Simply fantastic!! Theres only one problem with this fic.....you can't leave it like that!!!!!!!!! Please, please,pleas,please,please (and so-on.....!) give us another chapter!! I'm dying to read what you would write for the morning after....so if you could do that...it would be much appreciated!
 

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MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/07
i really, really like the part where you say they kept having sex to exist. niiice.
Author Feedback: Thanks!
 

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gingercat
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/07
Why keep it a secret? They are Wonderful for each other. H/HR Smut is always Great!
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/07
aww i wish you'd show the next morning! very hot, and very sweet. lovedddddd it!
 

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Lelymarques
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/07
AAAAAAAAAAh! Esse final é a coisa mais linda!!! Isso daria uma boa fic mais longa hein?! A ideia foi realmente otima! E o desenho muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuito bom!

Adorei!
Author Feedback: 'brigado! É talvez eu faça uma sequência, não sei. na verdade a fic teria uns 4 paragrafos a mais, mas eu e a Amethyst achamos melhor deixar assim. Acho que o final ficou mais interessante desse jeito né?

Thanks again!
 

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katediggory
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/07/07
very cute one shot. looking forward to reading your other fics soon
 

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