This fic started really well. The ‘passing-hours’ was so poignant and beautiful. You could feel what Hermione was feeling. A wonderful job.
However, I have to be honest, the end was quite disappointing. All the emotion we felt before seemed to vanish. It was too abrupt- too fast. He wakes up and says he loves her. The End. It could be better. A lot better.

Oh wow! That was just....amazing! Simply amazing! I cried my eyes out alittle there (even though it was a happy ending)lol. You're one of my favorite authors here, and this story just continues to prove why. You're just a simply gifted writer. I always get so excited when I see you've posted a new story. Soooo keep up the good work, because I pretty much love you!!

You've written some amazing stories in the past (in the last DAY in fact), but I think this is your best one yet. You make the concept of love seem so simple, yet so breathtakingly beautiful at the same time. It's hard to imagine that such a love as the one Harry and Hermione share in your story exists. Congratulations on writing a gorgeous story.

That was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. Truly amazing. You had my heart aching, even though I knew you wouldn't let Harry die.
That was just amazing. Please keep writing Bingblot you're brilliant.

Awww...that was really sweet. And it had a happy ending. I just love happy endings.

the tension, the devotion - very, very good. there is a link between the two characters that does make you wonder if one didnt make it, what would the other do? I guess I'd have to include Ron with that as well, but somehow Harry and Hermione are more intense. anyway, another great story.

That was beautiful - I loved that Hermione never gives up on him and she never will. He came back for her - that's what it is all about. Great job.

awwwwww!!! so wonderful and it made me get all teary-eyed!! i wasn't sure if you were going to let him live or not... i'm so glad you did!! great job on this little short. thank you for sharing it!!

And that is how it is. How it must be. How it should be. Thank you.....