Nicely done story. Well worth the read in my opinion, keep up the nice work in future fictions.

Okay to start with i have to say i like the story alot. The chapters could be a bit longer but thats okay anyway. I have to agree with you about not any Vamp!Harry stories out their and if they are slash and i just don't read it not that i have anything against it its just not my thing they only other good vamp!harry story i have found is Living Death by a wonderful Author Auror_Snape. She is great and has a bunch of HHr stories too. Harmony is the only way to go

Ok, so can I just say, how good of a writer you are?

That said, I completely agree with you on your opinion of DH, but after I read it again, it kind of helped to like... make it better.

anyway, keep writing amazing stuff!

As usual, your story captivated me, your audience, to a wonderful extent. The whole Vamp!Harry idea is marvelous, hope you don't mind if I borrow it?

great story! i usually stay away from vamp. fics and though i'm not sure what made of do start reading this one i'm glad i did. bill was pretty two-faced. defending harry, saying he was the same harry but still not wanting him near his family. is the world living under the ice and snow or am i just to tired to be reading? ramble on : luv: dysfunctionalspirit

Yay! They're together now! How wonderful I was afraid this was going to be an angst-filled fic from the start.... or at least from when Hermione was turned, but at least it seems as if she's somewhat accepting of her situation for now.

oh no! he's gone too long without food. that fool harry. on the one hand, if he turns hermione, they could be a couple forever... assuming she forgives him for turning her.

Yess, I can see where that would be disturbing to him; acquiring memories in that manner would disturb me, too. OTOH, I've seen some sf novels with similar things happening by pure advanced tech and not magic (hmm, Clarke's Third Law at work? Or it's reverse (any sufficiently advanced magic in indistinguishable from technology)? Now, his moves to totally neutralize Bella are a bit extreme, but she did ask for it and he did act in defense of himself and others. Despite how vampires are viewed, he's clearly not Dark, though I'd think it fair to label him "gray".

Heh, most interesting turns of events, there. I reckon Hermione's behavior is what I'd expect from her under the circumstances, she'd want to clear the air on a lot of things and now she's finding that Harry's got more problems than she thought but I doubt they'll put *her* off. Now, I can definitely see the two youngest Weasleys being severely put off by Harry's latest complication, and that's without the extreme reaction their mother will have. If Hermione's the only one staying with Harry, I'm sure that'll not set well with the youngest two Weasleys either, not that this is going to bother stop either Harry or Hermione.

well, now, that's an expectable reaction from Harry's escort and the Order. I'm really surprised they didn't have outriders or some similar extra protection, but, then, they've never needed it before. Still, I wonder if their magic orientation blinded them to the possibility of changing up and just using a muggle automobile to throw folks off? In any case, it's going to be an interesting time for all and I do have to feel some sympathy for Hermione. OTOH, I love Harry's response to Dumble's picture at the end of the chapter.

The origin of vampires? Well, I'm going out on a limb and say a magical virus is the cause; there's insufficient data, though, as to whether it's a naturally-evolved virus or something produced through the magical equivalent of biological engineering.

Hmm, now that's a lot to handle on what was supposed to be one of the best night's of Harry's life as he attained his majority. It's certainly a way of catching the reader's attention and interest and there's obviously one hell of a backstory here. I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of this story and seeing "who's cheatin' who and who's being true" in regard to the Light and to personal responsibilities.

I usually don't go for vampire fics, its not the concept of Harry being turned but my irrational dislike for vampires in general. However, this fic is well writen and has a good solid plot. I enjoyed reading it and I would like to congradulate its author on a job well done.

I enjoyed the ending, how the powers of nature once again prove themselves stronger then anything we human could possibly conjure. Although I overlook the scientific inaccuracy of the rapid glaciation of the northern hemisphere.

My only consern with your writting is that occasionally it doesn't flow well. This was a minor thing and only occured in a very few instances.

Keep Writing
Elariel

I usually don't go for vampire fics, its not the concept of Harry being turned but my irrational dislike for vampires in general. However, this fic is well writen and has a good solid plot. I enjoyed reading it and I would like to congradulate its author on a job well done.

I enjoyed the ending, how the powers of nature once again prove themselves stronger then anything we human could possibly conjure. Although I overlook the scientific inaccuracy of the rapid glaciation of the northern hemisphere.

My only consern with your writting is that occasionally it doesn't flow well. This was a minor thing and only occured in a very few instances.

Keep Writing
Elariel

I like that the fic was fast paced, you didn't linger and draw out lulls and buzz through action. The epilogue was a very nice touch, especially the cute little fluff at the end. I'm glad to see a well written vampire H/Hr fic - although if you have any recs, I would love to look into them!

british word for refridgerator - fridge!!

i like it so far well done