loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/12/07
I'm giggling right now. lol "two sickles and a dungbomb." I love it!!  And I am so into the kiss scene. So much fluff!  Fantastic story! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/07
That was very cute, and I liked the PotterPuppetPals reference, though I think it was nine sickles. Either way, this was a really sweet story and nicely written.
~luvsharrypotter (on FictionAlley) |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/07
A nice and gentle, but moving, story. I like the way she brought out what he wanted and then acted. Nicely written and quite plausible. |
Author Feedback: I must say, that is one of the best reviews I've ever received ^_^
Plausible = believable and that's REALLY what I'm going for, I'm so glad you think that.
Thank you so much for that wonderful review. |
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Thank you for this one! I really enjoyed it. It was apparently worth the wait to have you post
Congrats on excellent work!
Regards,
the_scribbler
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Author Feedback: Oh wow ... two reviews from the same person? Do I deserve that much for this fic 
Thanks a lot, I really appreciate every good word I receive.... |
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Aww, that was cute...extraordinary even! Ok, that was cheesy, but I loved your story, keep up the good work in your writing!!!
husker_fan_2006 |
Author Feedback: lol The amount of times I said to myself, "Wow, that's cheesy," when I repeated the word extraordinary are countless.... ^_^
And yet, this extraordinary ficlet deserves some extraordinary comments! ^^;; I know I sound like the bragger now, please forgive me 
Thanks for the encouragement, it'll go a long way; trust me! |
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Hey! A really nice story & excellent ending. You brought the two together in a very believable way and it was a pleasure to read it. Your dialog and the way you handled both Harry & Hermione's reactions was right on. GOOD JOB!!
Regards,
the_scribbler |
Author Feedback: YES! I try the HARDEST on dialogue, and making it sound like ... not fake or cliche, I personally was REALLY proud of my dialogue in this ficlet and thank you, so much, for noticing ^_^
Thanks for the encouraging comments! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/06/07
this one was really cute i really liked it good job. |
Author Feedback: Cute is not manly like me  but yeah, I guess that could be one of the elements I was trying to get across ... Hermione and Harry are a lot cuter than Harry and Ginny would ever be!!!
Thanks for the compliments ^_^ |
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/06/07
What a lovely little story. Short,not drawn out, and to the point. Enjoyable |
Author Feedback: But it's still barely above the word limit for the contest
I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I presume you did ^^ |
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