Yep, Harry doesn't think all the time in the books, does he? LOL A very interesting chapter - I love the way you write Harry and Hermione together. Well done!

A interesting first chapter , i look forward to many more . . .

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A interesting first chapter , i look forward to many more !


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Yep, I can really see Ginny as being a bit of a pest. LOL I got a kick out of Hermione de-gnoming the garden actually. She does have to strive for the best no matter what she does. I thought the talk between Harry and Hermione in the garden was well done - as was the bit on weddings. I have to say that my favorite part though, was that at the end with Luna. Well done!

Very interesting that Crookshanks is out and about on the prowl. I like the way you said that they'd worry when he did show up. I don't like the thing with Ginny. It feels like she's gonna go after him again. Great chapter!

An excellent first chapter, of course, I love all your work. I like the concept and I hope that what you envision will become true. Great job.

Excellent chapter, with some clever extrapolation of Mrs. Weasley's powerful magic. I also loved the lingering aftershocks of Mr. and Mrs. Weasley's tryst on the Quidditch pitch. I find myself dreading the time you run out of chapters.

Excellent chapter, with some clever extrapolation of Mrs. Weasley's powerful magic. I also loved the lingering aftershocks of Mr. and Mrs. Weasley's tryst on the Quidditch pitch. I find myself dreading the time you run out of chapters.

This is a wonderful story, and it is a shame that I do not have the time to properly review.
I believe I will have more time in a few weeks. Regrettably, I will be influenced by Book 7 by then.

Thank you for your story.

Hmm... I think you may have a hole in the wards around the Borrow. Wormtail as Skabbers lived with the Weasleys for years. He would know were the Borrow is and I'm sure they didn't get his signature to burn.

Does Harry truly need to pratice apparition? Wasn't Harry the one who appartated himself and, the weakend by poison, Dumbledore back from the cave? I know a lot of fics make Harry out to be a Super-Duper-All-Powerfull wizard. I don't beleive this is your intention but I do think there is something to be said for how powerful a wizard he is to become.

Ok, so we have a general idea as to how this ship will pull into port, so to speak, but that's pretty much a given on this site. So I geuss it's "Rock the Boat!". Seems like Hurricane "Ginny" may be a storm in the forcast.

Thanks for the update.

I am really enjoying this story so far. You have done a wonderful and beleivable job with the characters.

This was nice, I enjoyed seeing Harry play Ron like a fiddle regarding Luna and the wedding.

I must say your note at the end seems to throw up some gloomy forshadowing. Sort of like a little spoiler. Will it get that bad that you felt the need to set an anchor? Guess I'll have to come back and find out huh? (Gladly )

WOW! This is an amazing story! I absolutely love it!

I have really enjoyed the first six chapters of this excellent story, and am very keen to read more.
I always thought H/Hr was the logical outcome, and even if JKR has it as H/G at the end of DH, who's to say their teenage feelings are the same when the teens in question are 25 or 30?
I will be following this with great interest.

Another good chapter; nice interaction between the four friends, with a few hints of unresolved issues. Good work.