I have to read your other stories now! This one was pretty good, but just a bit rushed. The H/Hr parts were oh so yummy. ;]

i really enjoyed that story, the ending especially...can't wait to read your other stuff, thanks for sharing this

so far i'm really liking this story and i'm really glad you decided to write it...i can't wait to see what the end is like...

A very enjoyable story and nice addition to your portfolio. I am looking forward to reading other work of yours.

I enjoyed the chapter greatly and the seduction scene was good.

another great chapter. I am enjoying this story and your writing style ( some other have a good story but tell it poorly).

nice start to this story. looking forward to reading the rest of it.

I loved this story. Have you wrote a seqel or are you going to? I really hope so.

Really good ending. I hope you write a sequel containing little Emma. Please?

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

"Women have been vain since the beginning of time and will continue to be so." ?!
Whatever enables you to say such a great deal about the entire female population through times you never saw? I don't like the idea that "women" can be treated as such a homogenous group.
I liked the story so far, but this sentence made me loose all interes in your writing... I guess it was just a thoughtless comment and as your a/n: continues it shows what you mean is nothing bad... still I loathe such sentences and had to say something so you know what stopped one of your readers and made them loose interest in the story...

Lie
p.s. excuse all mistakes in my writing, english isn't my native language

oh my gosh.. i didn't even think this is the last chapter! can you make another one? i'm really dying to read it if in case.. my heart flutters all the way dowm to this very chapter.. you are just and simply brilliant!

i really love this chapter.. made my heart flutter just a bit faster

Great story, I think making a sequel would deffinaetly be a good idea.

Well, it didn't take much for her to stomp over that line, uh?