OH MY GOD this story is brilliant, i actually cried when i read it you really are good, i dont know when you wrote umbrella but if your still getting all that shit off people saying your stories are stupid then i would advise you to tell all of them ti go rot in hell, cause you are inspired by music something people take for granted and that nakes your stories even better. luv ya
from nicole dawn ncube a.k.a gretle
ps: i hate ron too.

i didn\'t like this one as much as i like unfaithful. idk why. but i love rihanna to lol

cute! but it kinda feels well.... unfinished.... sequel? (she suggests hopefully!)

i loved it so much, but it was sad! it was so sweet!

very sad, short and sweet. I am suprised that Ginny was with them. But a very nice angsty vignette

I like it. It wasn't one of your best but I still thought that it was a lot better than some of the other fics out there. I can't wait to see another story from you.

that was so sad yet soo sweet. I loved the part about the charms. I couldn't even imagine that. It was really sweet, even if it wasn't totally H/Hr in the couple sense, I thought it was perfect

That was really sad and really good. So..I see that they both were dating Ron and Ginny, but then later they stopped.

Why is it that you hate Ron so much thaty ou want to kill him off in yoru fics?

Aw that's so sad! But it was really sweet too, I love the song and I think your portrayed it well!

I suppose we have to be lucky that they died, otherwise this would not be H/Hr. In fact it still isn't, (well not really.)

It makes it worse, that you try to imply that Ginny and Ron were the world to their respective partners. And that doesn't sit well with me.

Okay, Harry and Hermione are left with each other, but to what end?

As this was a one shot, are we to assume that eventually they will be together, and we must use our own imagination to concoct the rest of it.

It's not badly written, on the contrary, but my first and last impression is of the H/G R/Hr pairings regardless of the actual content of the story.

I'm not sure that was your intention, but that was certainly something I couldn't get out of my mind.

it was a cute story.. i liked it.. it was really sad though.. i dont understand what u meant by saying it was too graphic bcuz we didnt really read anything graphic.. all we read was that they were tortured.. well ohhhh okayy i get it now.. sorry but ive read a lot of stories that were PG-13 and a lot more graphic.. sorry.. but i thouht it was a good story && i love the whole I HATE RON thing.. me too hes a self centered pig!! i mean i know thats kinda harsh but he is pigheaded.. well anywayss.. great job :]]

And then Ginny… he had spent the last three days wishing he had paid more attention to her back when they first met. He’d had no idea back then that she would become the most important person in his life.

Umm.. sorry to say this but don't you think the above line is a bit ridiculous?
Ginny.... the most important person in Harr's life?
Is this some sort of joke?
Are you trying to say that Harry cares more for Ginny than he does for Ron and Hermione?
Harry denies Ginny to come with him but he easily gives in to R/Hr and allows them to come with him.
What does this signify?

I only hate Ron 1/2 the time. This made me very sad. Not soo much Ginny, but Ron, he was Harrys 1st friend. Thank goodness they still have each other. If JK kills either of these two off....I think I'll burn my books! But I'll just keep reading Fanstories....they are MUCH better.