Wow! Really well written. The unique PoV that I almost never see made this great (plus some of that philosophical first love last love stuff  ). I think you found the perfect tone to use while writing - congrats! |
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Aww, that's sweet. I'm a sucker for kind of warm fuzzy stories like this and I love it! Great story, keep up the good work in your writing!! |
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That was very sweet, I can't imagine why it hasn't gotten more reviews. I liked the length, and although I was a little thrown off by the phrase 'when I...Harry Potter as a boy,' just because it sorta sounds like she is referring to when she was a boy (but I know that's not what you mean), I really, really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: I actually went back and forth between "as a boy" and "the boy," thinking along the same lines as you, but the way I went with seemed to flow better for some reason. Thank you very much, I'm happy you enjoyed it. |
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/07
How absolutely beautiful and eloquent. And the story ended just as it should have. |
Author Feedback: Thank you  |
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That was so sweet .... but please consider writing more. There is so much more to this story that it should really be told! You did a great job with this story! |
Author Feedback: I am considering writing a more extended story, but I do not think I will be elaborating on this one anytime soon. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you. |
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That was so sweet! I love how Hermione realizes that she's always considered herself to be Harry's and Harry to be hers. Well done!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you. That's love, isn't it? |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/07
I was quite overjoyed to see a new story from you, and what a story! This really was a wonderful bit of fluff, but not just run-of-the-mill fluff, this actually had some depth and substance to it. It was interesting to read an author who tackled the whole "first/young love never really lasts" issue. The concept of a second first kiss really worked well with this storyline.
This was an entertaining and refreshing story, I'm hoping that we'll see more from you in the future.
Thanks for sharing. |
Author Feedback: There will certainly be more in the future - Harry and Hermione just wont get out of my head. Thanks, I am always pleased to hear my fluff has something special to it. |
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Oh I totally loved this fic! It was so sweet...and that ending--I melted into a big pile of goo when I read it! In a word, FANTASTIC!  Defenitely going on my favorites list!!! |
Author Feedback: Goo is good.  Thank you so much. |
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Beautiful piece, dear. I'm looking forward to your other submissions for this contest. You should do the supreme OOC/Mary Sue one... |
Author Feedback: Hmm...I'm considering a story where everyone is 100% their stereotype, he he. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/07
Now that was a nice one, a short one but it covered everything it needed to. 'Twould be interesting to see more of the backstory of "how they got there", but 'tis not absolutely necessary (unless your muse gets as compulsive as mine is on occassion *grin*). |
Author Feedback: There is more of a story, I agree, but I thought a nice ficlet would be good. Thank you for your kind comment. |
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