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A Beautiful Mistake

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trabb

Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/07

You were right the story was long for a oneshot but felt right.There was no natural cutoff and the flow was good just as it was written.It takes al ot too put your thoughts and talents out there.Dont be discouraged look for constructive and helpful criticism and overlook the rest.

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Chrissy

Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/07

Great One Shot though the ending could of been written differently should've had this One Shot as NC17 or R rated not PG13 ending the fic with a NC17/R conclusion but great One Shot looking forward to reading more of your fics!!!!

Chrissy

Author Feedback: My first draft was NC17, but I decided to change it, cause I've been writting a bit too much NC17 lately and I can't actually think of these two charecters in a PG way, so i'm trying to get out of that lol

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jsdailey

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/07

A very nice story. Just about perfect. Keep up the good work.

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RupertsGirl112289

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/07

Aw that was cute and I've read some of ur other stories and I didn't think they were bad

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