Hey! I LOOOOVE this story. Like, a lot. Harry is slightly OC, but he's soooooooooooo sweet! This story is very well done, thanks!

OMFG.... I'm a guy and i can feel my heart crumbling at how sweet this story is, i admit that i started reading it for the erotic parts, but after a while i began to skip those parts and read the story itself..... it is so sweet! and its made me clucky.... Keep Up The Great Work

Absolutely love this story, and the smut is just hot Good job!

I'm glad that the Dean/Nat pairing is progressing, hopefully he won't make too many mistakes along the path but some he is bound to do because of his fear of commitment, but I'm sure she will forgive him.

A lot of steamy stuff in the chapter, too, which never hurts and a couple flashbacks, which were nice although I kind of struggle when someone writes Harry as "mistreating" or not considering Hermione enough in school. I mean, sure, they didn't hook up so maybe he did overlook her as a potential love interest but I never saw him as pulling away from her during the series. Well, maybe in HBP he did, but he was back to his normal self in DH, where if anything it was her who distanced herself from him after the Malfoy Manor business

Mind you, I understand why you have inserted it into the story, and I don't really mind it, but I'm just pointing out that even if they didn't hook up in school and we never had a clear indication of him fancying her, this doesn't automatically mean he was an ass to her like the first flashback suggests or distanced himself from her like the second flashback suggests It's not manadatory that they fall in love during school, it can easily happen after it, and possibly it would even be more realistic, how many people end marrying the person they have been dating/fancying/been in love with when 17 years old?

So they are ok now, and, just to hit a bit more on the point I was trying to make with my last review, what's the big change going to be for them? That Harry will try to be more open, and Hermione will try to rein her need to know what's bothering him in a bit more? To be honest, it's not a big change at all, not one which justifies the need for such a big fight, imho, because as I said before, it's not a major event in the main storyline.

But enough with it, I'm sure you got it that I didn't like the whole matter since the moment she overreacted to where they are now, and I'm sure you disagree with what I think of it, at least going by the review replies you left for the previous chapter, so I better start talking about something else before I piss you off

Now, Dean is really in love with Natasha it seems. He better not make a mess of it for fear of his feelings otherwise he might not get another chance, he's already lucky he got this one.

"He still felt extremely disgusted with himself for what had happened at the beginning of the week, and was feeling as though he didn't deserve her touch, no matter how much he craved it." Predictable reaction from him, really. And a bit silly too, if you ask me, but we all know how Harry is, and Hermione does too, which is why U said in my previous review that she had clearly overreacted, and possibly caused this. She should have predicted what her reaction would start.

And if I have to be completely honest about it, I think their whole spat, starting from her reaction that morning to what transpired in this chapter (which I think was way over the top regarding the words they exchanged, there's no absolute way Harry would say those things to her, and there'0s no way she would say such things to him, even in the worst moment of rage from them both), was quite unnecessary for the story. I know angst is good for a story because makes it less boring but only if something major is going to come from it, otherwise if it is resolved in one single chapter, and even more if it has no real impact on the major storyline, I feel it to be pointless. But hey, maybe it's just me, so don't mind my words too much

Dean was a wanker, but maybe he's starting to finally realize what it means to be in love. Hopefully it's not too late for him to get Natasha back.

I think Hermione overreacted there, I know what Harry did and said was wrong but really, couldn't she realize he was caught in the moment?

I fear her overreaction might have something to do with him shying away from sex from then on, like he's scared he could act the same again.

And damn Dean for interrupting them just to ask if they think he's shallow, of course he is!!

Neville should cut the insecurity a bit, he risks upsetting her soon or later. But I'm glad for him that he has finally found himself a girlfriend.

The cake was absolutely overpriced, 6000 galleons for a cake when Steven's bail is 5000? It's unbelievable. On second thought, Justin is not trying to raise funds for Steven to pay his bail, is he? Nah, It can't be, or at least I hope it can't

I'm glad Ron is moving in with Luna

And of course, nice hot scene at the end

So will they have twins? And how the hell would Dumbledore be able to rpedict that?

Anyway, nice touch to have the wedding at Hogwarts, it's fitting I think. But I hope they manage to put Steven in jail once for all before the ceremony, to be honest, although I fear they might not.

Ahah, Dean's comments were priceless, but I'm sure he will find someone who charms him and he will settle down pretty fast too

well damn. that was some kind of intense :] and natasha is so adorable. dean needs to be more honest with his feelings otherwise the poor girl will get so discouraged! anyways. great chapter as always and update again soon!

I want to keep on reading!!! I'm loving Dean and Natasha's relationship!!!plz keep the great job and don't forget taht you shouldn't make us(your faithful readers) wait too long!!

Very good chapter, I just have a feeling another shot of them might have been taken. Well, more than a feeling, really, although it would have been very difficult for a photographer to get there, uh?

Steven was at his asshole best during the questioning but I'm sure he didn't see that coming at the end,

So is he in prison now, until he pays the bail, or is he out until the trial? I think it's the second, and for sure he'll try something before the trial, or he finds a way to be found innocent

I'm glad Hermione made Harry see reason, but I have a feeling their troubles with Steven are quite a long way from being finished