It was all very good, except I didn't think Harry should be thinking about her "Pink Cashmere Sweater" and "Blush and Eyeshadow." Guys don't think like that.. Even though I am a girl.. well, I don't think Harry would say stuff like that, because, well guys don't really know that much about those kind of details!

Bloomin eck you are quite brilliant at half stories, is there ever going to be more to this.

I actually rather liked how you've approached this - hope you are going to finish it?

interesting story you got here cant wait for the next chapter

please do it on 1 clump i can't deal with havin to wait weeks or months waiting for you to finish this story!!!

I can't wait for the next update to see what will happen next. I like it a lot.

That was a very good first part to the story. Poor Harry and Hermione is so clueless. I can't wait to read the other half. Keep up the good work.

Aw, Poor Harry! I hope he can find the courage to tell Hermione that he likes her. Cute story so far!

I am really enjoying this story and can not wait for the next part. Update soon and keep up the great work!

What the hell. Harry gave her to him that's like giving her to the devil Harry you stupid prat.

eeeeeeeekkkk!!! ***totally shrieking here!!!!***

OMG!!! and it was just sooooo romantic!!! i really really love harry getting jealous! and he simply had to close his eyes!!! that one ultimately got me!!!

umm...why only second class??? order of merlin...he killed Moldyshorts, dumby killed Grindlewald and he got first class....great story

Oh my! I sympathize with HarrY! I wouldn't know what to do if i were in his shoes. And Hermione seems to really like Tim. Sigh! It just seems unrealistic for Hermione to easily, gladly accept Harry when he admits his feelings to her. Coz then it would mean that she didn't like Tim as much. Oh, I don't know. Maybe something will happen to paint Tim in a bad light.

i really like your story i think its so cute they way ron and harry are so protective of hermione i hope you update sooner rather than later

i really like your story i think its so cute they way ron and harry are so protective of hermione i hope you update sooner rather than later