Hey
I'm going to stop reading here, as I like this ending xP
I must say, despite the OOCness in many parts, I did enjoy this fic. I really loved how you incorporated Draco into the fic, and you constructed his character SO well that I was almost struggling to pick between Harry and Draco, even though I knew it would end up Harry and I am first and foremost a die-hard H/Hr shipper. Even so, Harry was a bit of a prick and Draco was just so ... likeable. Anyway, I did love Draco's character. I actually thought he was very true to character. The reader can almost see him changing through the course of the fic.
I enjoyed their weekends and nights out thing; a very normal life for twenty-something year olds, and it was nice to see them have that. It was funny how they all interacted.
Ron and Luna were very cute, by the way. I loved your characterisation of Luna, too. She was very funny after being accidentally knocked to the floor by Draco.
I didn't like the Lestrange-capture-Hermione bit. It just seemed haphazardly thrown in to move the plot along. There was no indication to it before that, and I just think it was extremely random and badly put together.
Regardless, I do like this fic. You had a number of grammar mistakes -- especially 'to', 'too' and 'two'. But it was an enjoyable, fun read!
All in all, it was a good fic!
xCNx

I just love the coupling in this story! AW, I was so torn between H/Hr and D/Hr. I like the way you ended this, especially the relationship between D/Hr. Although I'm not a total huge fan of their shipping, I loved it here. You don't see Draco characterized in this manner often so it's nice to see a sexy, mature and down-to-earth Draco.

oh my...i don't think this is quite finsihed yet...im feeling a sequel from this point onwards..(oh please oh please...let me be right?!)

I am truly entranced by your story. I love the angst and hidden love of Harry & Hermione. In some ways, I always wanted Draco to have respect for Harry and Hermione. Thanks for writing this great story...

I really had a great time reading you story. I love angst, when it's well done and you really made the D/Hr parts believable. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I can't wait to check your other stories, I just wish there'd more of them!

'I got on the phone and called the girls, said
Meet me down at Curly Pearls for a Neh Nah Nah Nah'

I loved the reference and Curly the bartender and the
'the night was young and so are we'

I just love that song.

Anyways, I know that the review was later, but I have taken liking to your writing from 'Less Than Tomorrow' (I still don't get the title) and decided to read all your stuff. I must admit, I saw the Lavender making the sleeping with Harry up from a mile away, but the twist in the Hidden Agenda was original and I did not expect it. Kudos.

I know that some people have mention this already, but you do have a lot of mistakes in your writing. Try your best to edit thoroughly before posting or giving it to your beta.

Cheers

i like this story, i really do. but it seems to me that it would better pass for pg-13. it doesn't give any "details" if you know what i mean.

but it's an all around good story

this epilouge really leaves the hermione draco relationship kinda open rite? from her dissapointed look and draco obvouisly wants her and that last line he said probably makes her think of the wat if she did go wit him? so I was wonderin if there might b a sequel? I came across this stry after I read tears and ur an amazing writer, can't wait to read ur new story and if u have time could u answer my question

Man, this story is so good! I cant wait to finish it. I just had to let you know how much I'm enjoying it!

I stumbled onto this fic because I've been reading "tears" and loving it...I can't believe it, but I actually wanted her to be with Draco. This is huge--you're such a great writer that you can make me completely give up a pairing I hoped for fervently for years in canon in just a few short chapters. Amazing.

great story...the getting-together scene between Harry/Hermione was a little rushed, but I really enjoyed the Draco/Hermione moments! I wasn\'t hoping for a Harry-Cho confrontation at the end, I just wanted someone to push her off a bridge or something

oh my! what a story maybe i was too caught up in the story that i didn't realize harry must be in love with her for such a long time. well maybe i did, but i didn't know why he had to go around like a rabbit and when i knew, i understand why heheh!

why i like this story a lot?

well because i shipped DHr for such a long time (throw some fire? ) and i think Hermione and one of the twins will look hilarious! too bad george was sooo serious in this story. well, maybe next time he wont be (if there is any)

good job!

ok rediculous that you did not type the sex scene, it is rated NC-17 for a reason and you should have showed. Because you didn't you should have the rating at PG-13 or lower because the content clearly is not NC-17, the story was great leading up to it, but when the scene wasn't there it just didn't work out...the sex scene can make or break the story, and it broke this story for me, it was good until then...i don't think i will continue reading now...make better choices next time...

Harry really acted like a jerk in this chapter. It's not fair of him to have a different girl every ni´ght, but get totally possesive whernever a guy shows interest in Hermione. Draco is really cunning, he is trying to get Hermione's sympathy instead of openly flirting with her. That's clever, he knows that her big heart for outsiders is a weak point for Hermione.

Sometimes Harry and Hermione can be so dumb. Why doesn't Hermione notice how jealous Harry gets whenever a man pays attention to her? Why can't Harry see that Hermione has fallen head over heels for him?