I relly love your stories. You never leave me confused about anything, you tell the story with such detail without leaving anything out but without over-explaining. Absolutley wonderful! |
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Awwww, that was so cute!!! Em as a baby, so small at 2 months old and already expected to be a big sister. The Harry and Hermione dialog was classic, but it is at it's best when it is that way. I love the way the way they are with each other, so loving, so comforting. Well great job, flash backs are always good.
Love Amanda |
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I love this scene and it does provide a nice break from the building tension. |
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quite nice scene - i understand not putting it into the furiously paced Circles End, but it is definitely too good not to post.
And I have sons just 14 months apart, and nieces 11 1/2 months apart - so i understand that part also.
thanks for a very enjoyable scene |
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Thanks, I needed a break from reality, oh wait I meant the fantasy world I live in today, today was a mixed bag to start but got decidedly better, and a one-shot from one of my fav authors will insure that it ends great. Such a touching scene, it's one of the things I like about your writing, you give backstory through your one-shots when you can't figure where they'd gel in the actual story. Makes a reader come back again and again. Or it's one of the things that keep me coming back. Hope everything is going good for you. Happy writing and read you soon. |
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CaliburstSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/07
Ahhhhhhhhhh . . .
Nice and fluffy. I am very glad that you're having these little flash-back scenes to bridge the gap between the two series. There are so many questions and little details that could be revealed like little jewels.
I hope to see more, and not just fluffy things.
In-between the two stories, what was the moment that Harry and Hermione were most concerned about one or both of their children?
(Fluff) Em and Sirius' first words?
How did H/Hr talk about Ron and Luna for the first time to the kids? Voldemort?
When was the first time H/Hr looked that their kids and realized that they were really becoming their own persons (especially for Harry and Emilia)?
Lost scenes of Anna/Nathan Draco/Ginny?
Stuff like that. Just little brush-strokes. The kind you are so good in using.
I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CaliburstSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/07
Ahhhhhhhhhh . . .
Nice and fluffy. I am very glad that you're having these little flash-back scenes to bridge the gap between the two series. There are so many questions and little details that could be revealed like little jewels.
I hope to see more, and not just fluffy things.
In-between the two stories, what was the moment that Harry and Hermione were most concerned about one or both of their children?
(Fluff) Em and Sirius' first words?
How did H/Hr talk about Ron and Luna for the first time to the kids? Voldemort?
When was the first time H/Hr looked that their kids and realized that they were really becoming their own persons (especially for Harry and Emilia)?
Lost scenes of Anna/Nathan Draco/Ginny?
Stuff like that. Just little brush-strokes. The kind you are so good in using.
I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/07
That is so sweet! It is weird to think of them as babies when we read about them now and they are almost adults! I didn't realize how close they were in age, but it makes sense with how close they are personally in their relationship. So neat, I loved being able to read it! Thanks! |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/07
That's a rather nice little bit, showing us the quiet, family side of their lives. I like the way the detail was convincing without being over done. |
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Awww...this is cute! If I haven't told you already...you're my favorite fanfic author...  Good job. |
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Cute and poignant and wonderful. I personally think the universe you've created with "Circle's" et all is near the most compelling on Portkey, or any fanfic site. |
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Aw, that was too cute - with fluffy goodness! An excellent companionable, one-shot piece. Good job you two!  Now as you said on with our regular program! |
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/07
how sweet. I have often looked in on my own family like this. very nice. |
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