Aw, That was really cute! Hee hee, It looks like both of them really won.  |
Author Feedback: Hehe, they totally did win!!  (Don't we just fluff??)
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thanks for this cute story - looking forward to reading your other fics soon |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review!
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It is cute and they are soooooo cute playing that game. I think Harry was brillant with picking the idea of her picking her birthday. Keep Writing.  |
Author Feedback:  I love that they made a game out of something they do anyways! 
Thanks for the review!!!
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
Nice more fluff !
I like the huge amount of response my challenge got.
Awesome stuff ! |
Author Feedback: Thanks!!
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PS: I guess people just love the idea of Harry and Hermione staring at each other!!! *wink* |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
hehe, such a sweet story..i was grinning like a maniac the whole time!!haha, and the tears definitely threatened to fall when I tried to swallow my grin..haha, lovely fic!!!
I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!! |
Author Feedback: Haha, you weren't the only one grinning!!  (Haha, and believe or not, but I'm grinning right now!)
Haha, just remember, Delusional is the new cannon! *Wink wink, nudge nudge.*
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Awwww... short and fluffy... always a good thing (more so the latter than the former). I didn't find this OOC at all (then again, I *have* read a lot of fanfiction). I figured he'd get her by kissing her at the last moment, so I was pleasantly (and somewhat disappointedly) surprised he got her just by saying those three little words in her ear... Although I was sort of trying to imagine how he could whisper in her ear without breaking the stare, but it's H&H fanfiction, so one should really learn not to ask questions...
Tremendous job well done!
H&H4EVA
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Author Feedback: Yeah, it's always hard to tell if the characters are OOC in fanfiction, or in cannon. (I guess that's what happens when you read too many fanfictions--scratch that, you can never read too many H/Hr fanfiction!)
Haha, he didn't look at her when he was whispering. (That'd be kinda hard, no? Unless, you know, Fred and George made new inventions called "See the Love of Your Eye--Transports Your Eye (s) to the One You Love!) Haha, sorry.
Thanks for the review, by the way!
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
A delightful and cute bit of fluff, but nicely done fluff for all that. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review! |
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SummerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
oh that was adorable. i mean, seriously, how is anyone not supposed to sigh with happiness? utter fluffiness!!!! great job! |
Author Feedback: Thanks!!
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harry31Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter
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Author Feedback: Thanks, but I'm sorry to say that there will be no next chapter.  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
That was a really cute fic...I loved all teh fluff. Wonderful way of making Hermione lose.  |
Author Feedback: Oh yeah, totally. Sometimes you just need Hermione to lose.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
Overall very good, but there was a bizarre change to third person in one line of the story. Was that a mistake or intentional? I did enjoy the story very much, however. |
Author Feedback: Uh... whoops? Yeah, I guess that was a mistake. Forgive me. It was my first time writing a first person POV, and I had a hard time not writing in third. (I really, really like third better than first, but I thought first would suite well with this.)
Thanks for the review, though! And thanks for pointing out my mistake!
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Very sweet. I dearly love fluff. It's my absolute favorite kind of fan fiction. I wish that you'd consider continuing this story. I think that you could build a fantastic multi-chaptered fic off of this story. Sort of start over at book 4 and "fix" things a little. |
Author Feedback: Haha, I'm sorry, but I highly doubt I'd be doing that. This took place in year seven, and I don't think I could re-write the books. (I'll just leave JKR to that )
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/07
I liked a lot. You are a very good writer. |
Author Feedback: Awww, thanks!!! I don't think I am, but it's really nice of you to think I am!!!! |
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Cute... sugary sweet and fluffy as all get out. Sometimes that exactly what needs to be written.
Thanks for that.
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Author Feedback: No problem. Sometimes there just needs to be sugar added to the lemons. Then waddya get? LEMON DROPS!!!
Uh... sorry about that... I don't know what I was thinking... I was just a bit high... Propel tends to do that to me... and I just--sorry, shutting up now.
Thanks for the review!!!
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You're begging for reviews for a short short story that you say only took 15 minutes. The rest of us pour blood, sweat and tears along with hours of thought into our stories and maybe get a few reviews.
ha ha ... just kidding ...
Not bad ... not bad at all ... you're improving.
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Author Feedback: I was begging for reviews? Uhh... Whoops? (Man, how many times have I said that today??)
Don't worry, you're not the only one that pours blood and sweat for stories. (Not all of which, if I might say, are Harry Potter related. I'm trying to write an origional book. But you could care less, couldn't you? Sorry, shutting up now. Just a bit hyper is all  )
But hey, thanks for the review!!!! (Now... where's that Propel...?)
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