this was a great story.. i cant wait to read the next chapter.. there is a next chapter right?? well anyways great job :]]

Great story! Amazing potential! I love what you've done and where I think the story is going! You should be really proud of what you've written so far. You've gotten the characters right and your dialog is pretty good (could use a little tightening up...but that's practice). The best thing is the integration of the schools' founders into the story line in a way that makes alot of sense. GOOD JOB!!

Great start to the story, I like the interleaved stories of the Founders and the two student organizations. The creation of the sorting hat was a nice touch... anyway, thanks and can't wait for the next update!