Ha! I loved this story. Poor Harry. Dragons, hundreds of dementors, death-eater, dark lords, basilisks.....but two small children and two very pesky neighbors...nope. Can't handle that. And really who can blame him. Yeah, poor Harry.

Ahaha, that was a great story. I think you did a great job with the plot. It might not have been as light as you wanted, but it worked. I liked how you threw Ron in there, that was awesome =)

Enjoyable story! Amusing to have Hary refer to other sixties shows like Mr. Ed and 'I Dream of Jenie' (don't think I spelt the name right there).

For some reason I particularly liked Luna in this one. From their noting the "the long, blonde hair framing a pair of eyes so prominent" onwards, the girl who noted calmly that she could 'talk to dogs' was a fun part of the story. Reminds me of *my* favourite 60s show, "My Favourite Martian", and the several episodes where Uncle Martin talked to dogs, actually! :-)

Good of you, also, to make Ron an expert in his field, someone to respect. Also amusing the various occasions where the responsibilities in the R/L household were made clear.

Were you being evil here and trying to tease us, resurrecting that fandom theory that Dumbledore is actually Ron Weasley, traveled back through time? That's one hypothesis she's actually formally debunked on her web site.

Amusing story!

Thank you very much for doing this. I didn't realize I was an exception, and I thank you profusely. Credit where it's due, however, the idea was my mother's, but I was working on my own story, "Confused" and simply didn't have time. (Those of you who are reading it know that I hardly have time to write my own story ) Thus we're both very thankful and I'm glad everyone here loved it too. I hope to do a sequel some day, but...

Once again, thank you very much!

It's funny. I like the old Bewitched show, so this is a hit with me.

Looking forward to your other stories.

are you sure thqt this wasn't a plot cooked up by the third generation of marauders?

Good! Sadly, not truly big in the humor department but a well crafted short story — and that's really often better (and rarer) than a big boffo joke. I'll take it almost any day.
Keep writing; focus on your strengths. Humor and pathos and worlds of emotions will come through as the story unfolds.
Old Chuck

Sounds like Ron never quite got his fill of adventure after adventure.

LOL - you did a great job with the comedy! I'm with you though - it is much harder to write than angst is! I'm glad you did this though and I look forward to reading your next one soon!

Very maddening indeed and loved it . Only Harry and Hermione could have a child like that. Giggles really enjoyed it.

As an old fan of bewitched (reruns, though, I wasn't around when they first aired) I recognized the plot, but it came accross a little less light-hearted than the old show. This was a bit heavy toned for comedy - angsty even.

I am impressed with the dialogue, the pacing, and the general use of language. While I'm not normally into too much angst, and I suspect your other stories are gonna be angst heavy, I'm gonna take a look at 'em, anyway.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, and keep up the good work.

*snicker* *chuckle* *guffaw* Oy!!! That was a funny one and a perfect punch line. Congrats on a good and funny story.

Very cute, and an enjoyable read. Nothing like a change of pace to clear the metaphorical palate. Good work!

That was effing awesome! Seriously, that was so clever...hahah! I loved it, you made all the characters so believable! Luna the dog whisperer I can see it now.

Really though, I felt like I was watching an old episode of Bewitched! This really is a great story and it was wonderfully written! Great job and I really, really, really can't wait to see more from you!

Sarah

Awww This was funny and cute! I can imagine Harry's reactions to the news that his son was a puppy, it was a really good story!